Really great chapter! I love that Sesshoumaru is staying, and angry at the way Inuyasha treats Kagome. Inuyasha is only proving to SSesshoumaru how right about his half-brother he really is. Not even Sesshoumaru realized how horrible he was to Kagome until now. I look forward to seeing Sesshoumaru and Kagome become more fond of eachother.
I'm really enjoying this so far, and the points you bring up as Kagome's character flaws and InuYasha's lack of chioce in the beggining of his tale are interesting! I hope you have fun with school and continue to find time to write this story (:
Debra (Chapter 3) - Wed 24 Aug 2016
Great chapter. I also agree with you. Kagome always made excuses for Inuyasha. I don't think he ever really appreciated the fact that Kagome loved him for himself, and wanted to be with him as he was. Unlike Kikyo who wanted him to be human, and get rid of the jewel first. I always hated the way Inuyasha never really picked Kagome over Kikyo before she died. It made them finally being together years later less meaningful to me. Yes he obviously missed her for those three years, but did he just pick her because she was all he had left? She seemed like one of those girls that always takes her cheating abusive boyfriend back, because she's either in denial (about his love), or afraid (of moving on-change). I look forward to your next chapter.
Good chap pleased update soon
Great start, can't wait to see what happens next! :D
Violla (Chapter 2) - Tue 09 Aug 2016
Una bellissima storia spero che aggiorni al piu presto.
Debra (Chapter 2) - Tue 09 Aug 2016
Oh I really like this one as well.
Love this story so far. Poor Sessho can't seem to get a break but it looks like he's going to meet Kagome in the next chapter to which I am looking forward to. He will be changing his opinion of her soon enough when she starts taking care of him lol. Of course nice writing as usual. Fantastic job!
Interesting
You got me hooked. I believe I am going to enjoy this story. Nice start off. Keep it going and of course nicely written. Can't wait for the next chapters.
Deana (Chapter 1) - Tue 02 Aug 2016
Can't wait to see where you are going with this. Good story so far.
I'm super excited to read this story!! I kinda have an idea where it might lead but I love how to start you have Sesshomarus mother involved. Can't wait for more. Thank you for your story!!
Somiant (Chapter 1) - Tue 02 Aug 2016
It got my attention , I wonder what the spell entails? , very excited for this story.
thanks for sharing :D
I already love your story! <3
I hope it goes in the direction that I'm thinking of, but anyway you're a great writer, and I'm looking forward to read the next chapters! ^^
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