I'm so proud of Kagome :D. I'm excited to see what will happen next!
"if he tries to kill or eat me, you better stop him." Omg I love that so much((:
I love this so far! I can't wait to see what you have in store for us!
Loved Loved Loved this chapter and the much anticipated bathing scene....giggle! Love the ultimate dominance play! LMAO! That was amazing. Thanks for the great update.
LOL Sesshomaru, really man!? Great chapter, can't wait for Rin to join the mix!
Love it. I'm wondering how inuyasha will take the change in packs dynamic since that last stunt from 'titan' was obviously a challenge. Interesting, interesting.
Mona (Chapter 9) - Sun 19 Feb 2017
How is Kikyo pregnant? If she is not alive, just dirt and bones and flesh, an empty shell. Perhaps even though Inuyasha mated her he will soon find out that she is barren because she is not suppose to be on earth. Hopefully that is how it will play out. I really don't want Inuyasha to have too much of a happy ending. He had the option to have a real live person instead chose the dead.
Zeelian (Chapter 8) - Sat 18 Feb 2017
Nice story sofar.
Just one small thing, if Sessh is supposed to be trying to hide who he is, and Kags supposed to be trying to hide that she knows, they might need to be a bit more careful. As many times as they slip up just in ch 7 and 8 it should be obvious to anyone not blind or stupid...
Oh I just love this story! Poor Kags tho~. I very eager to see the next chapter :D.
GAH so much turmoil and emotional tramma in this one! I can't wait for the next chapter.
Deana (Chapter 8) - Sat 11 Feb 2017
Good chapter! More Please! Update soon. Sorry to hear about your great great grandmother.
I'm glad and sad for Kagome. She will finally get some real training done.
Great chapter! Good progress between sess and kags... though I am hoping Inu gets bit or something soon. He is such an idiot! Looking forward to them getting Rin and seeing Kagome's training!
I loved this chapter. She has made more progress than she realizes. So has he. The bath scene will come when it comes. I love how this story is moving. Thanks for a wonderful update.
It's true!! I had always thought the same thing about Izayoi. She may had been nice when Inu no Taish? was around because she wanted what he had, power. I mean he had a mate and son already so to me it was like she intentionally wrecked his home. But than again it was okay for a male back in those days to have more than one wife. I just can't see her as being sad or heartbroken about causing trouble. I always thought in the end Inu No Taishõ.
I can't wait to see what happens next.
Nice background on their relationship. I can't hate on Izayoi too much. Yes, she was a spoiled princess but she got swept off her feet by a handsome demon, impregnated, thrown out by her family and then rejected by his, yeah I can imagine how bitter she must have been. I love the regret that Sessh feels remorse for hurting her.
I love this! The way you describe Sess's past is much as I imagined it. He looked grown in the anime when his Dad died, but hello, demon aging! He could be super young as far as demons are concerned... I kinda always thought of Izayoi as spoiled, or at least a bit immoral too, what with being the other woman and all. Anyway, I love that Sess tried to appologize, and had a mini-epiphany of, 'wow I was a total scumbag in the dream world' I can't wait for the next chapter!
Deana (Chapter 7) - Fri 27 Jan 2017
Love this Chapter! I agree with you about Izayoi, after all why would you go with a man knowing he had wife and a child. Even though in the anime he was supposedly in love with her and lost his life saving her. I guess back in the fuedal era it was expected that a man cheat on his wife, after all it was a man's world in every since of the word.
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