Drugs are bad, M'Kay?
Haha, OK. every chapter lights up my eyes and makes my day the same way mischief makes my eyes light up.
It was a bit short, but it felt like a satisfying snack right before a large snack. had lots of detail and character development which is crucial for depth. I love that you brought ramen into it and made it clear sex is not equal to romance.
Thank you for updating!
iin (Chapter 15) - Fri 04 Nov 2016
I'm so exciting to know their journey to earth planet...will kagome come with them? or just inu's brothers?
please explaining the cause of earth doomsday the next page....thank 4 your update
Koree (Chapter 14) - Wed 19 Oct 2016
Oooo Sessh is nasty xD lol great chap
Halcali (Chapter 14) - Wed 12 Oct 2016
"Planet Earth?"
I like where this is heading. This is getting so exciting, like, i didn't expect this development! It's amazing that there's a surprise in every chapter. Great job!
Again, thanks for the update! Anticipating the next!
Amora (Chapter 14) - Mon 10 Oct 2016
Luv it . Keep up the good work
iin (Chapter 14) - Fri 07 Oct 2016
a very...very long dangerous dan crazy experientment from earth?! was earth the kagome's ancestor origin planet?..hem....
I think it's interesting if you can tell us about kagome background origin planet...just a little bit to make us more curious..
Yaaaaaaas! I am literally giddy when you update. I live how complex this story is, all the different elements as well. You honestly could sell this to a publisher once it's all said and done. ( name changes and descriptions of course):D
Toni (Chapter 14) - Fri 07 Oct 2016
Really enjoying this story. Looking forward to reading the next chapter
VivWolf (Chapter 14) - Fri 07 Oct 2016
Uhhhh...don't know if I can edit reviews but the questionnaire where emojies... ;___; ....
VivWolf (Chapter 14) - Fri 07 Oct 2016
Huzzah????????????. I'm trying for subtlety because I think I over did it on your wall. You deserve it though! I felt this chapter to be a bit shorter but plot progress occurred which was good! (Emphasis on the gooood....if you know where that's from kudos and brownie points.)
Keep on writing you detail oriented, plot twisting authoress you!
-viv
Jenna (Chapter 13) - Tue 20 Sep 2016
Ohhhh! Wow!!! It feels like something big is about to happen :D
Koree (Chapter 13) - Tue 20 Sep 2016
Intresting story :) very original
VivWolf (Chapter 13) - Tue 20 Sep 2016
OMG, not enough chapters. I am feeling greedy, I want MOAR. Good stories and a good writer are hard to come by. Please don't stop!
You are awesome!
VivWolf (Chapter 7) - Tue 20 Sep 2016
Okay, Yup. I am in love with this story. I glanced at it a couple times thinking you would ruin a good concept but I've got to hand it to you. You have done an impeccable job. The story flows well, the characters are true to their personalities, the plot is unique. OMG, all of the teases. And yassss queen. You done good.
Please keep writing. Thank you.
desje (Chapter 13) - Sun 18 Sep 2016
I got caught by the word REKTAN 7, and the blurb was interesting but the story itself is epic. I read through these 13 chapters like butter, it became gradually more addicting. The best thing about it though is the world building but don't forget about characters! They are good for right now but I wouldn't mind seeing deeper development in the future. Love the mystery ^.^ Thank you for updating and great work on it.
This is... AMAZING!! I'm so excited to continue reading this story! Thank you for posting!
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