Oh my gosh !!!!!

this is brilliant as always, love the killer bad boy you portray sesshomaru as

So interesting love the the hang you give the reader with sort of vague details cause  it gets you thinking what is he a part of ? And how powerful is this mysterious man anyway in this world and also if souta ever met him what would his expression be. Just so much I love it the details and the storyline is brilliant one of the most phenomenal works of scific in this site other than " her voice" in my opinion but yours # 1 number

keep up with the good work love to see what type of adventure you can weave for us 

Sincerely

Your fan whos hungry for more "cold" chaps to read

Oh my gosh this is brilliant as always, love the killer bad boy you portray sesshomaru as

So interesting love the the hang you give the reader with sort of vague details cause  it gets you thinking what is he a part of ? And how powerful is this mysterious man anyway in this world and also if souta ever met him what would his expression be. Just so much I love it the details and the storyline is brilliant one of the most phenomenal works of scific in this site other than " her voice" in my opinion but yours number keep up with the good work love to see what type of adventure you can weave for us 

Sincerely

Your fan whos hungry for more "cold" chaps to read

Awesome start! This is gonna be my first sci-fi Sesskag read so I'm pretty excited how this story develops. I'm loving it by the way! Looking forward to the next chapter!

Loving it and anxiously waiting for more, loving this Sesshoumaru

Is xaltan  as same as captain or leader?  Will sesshomaru get back  to kagome's home?  

Sounds like this is going to be a great adventure

I can't imagine I would help and take a stranger in my home...really scary and dangerous...

but I really like your kagome's portrayal...smart, kind and brave woman...but love to do something dangerous like a thriller movie...he...he..

Love your fanfic. It's very creative. Your flow of the characters personalities in the futuristic theme is awesome. Keep up the good work!! can't wait to read more :)!!!

Every time I read a chpater, I just want to push a fast forward button so that I can read more. Kagone and Sesshomaru both have some trouble going I. For them and I can't wait to figured it out. Can't wait to see what happens next. I don't mind long chapter so if prefer those I'm down. Its still going to suck when I get to the end of the chapter.....

Gosh I wish I had a house like Kagome's even if it is low level.  Great chapter. It is getting more intriguing each chapter posted. I am so loving it. You are doing a fantastic job in detail desciptions. Keep up the good work. Of course I am looking forward to more longer chapters.

Oh my gosh, this is meeting up to all my expectations !!!! :) I cant wait is kagome going to be a heir to some sort throne to a sercert race but ,she ran away for some reason. Or maybe kagome is daughter to some harass outlaw who she escaped for the sake of her brother, or maybe a powerful being to a prophecy and her mother hid them from those people who are hunting her down  , oh I can't wait to see what you cook up next I'm so excited!!!! I really wanna see how this goes; and short or long the chapters are good either way so take your pick all I ask is update whenever you have time don't stress , your doing great!!!

Sincerely,

Your advid fan

What a brilliant start! SciFi AU stories are rare and this one shows great promise. I love how subtle you insert the alien environment without falling back to descriptions and the way you extrapolate technical development.  The ambience you've created so far is very vivid. I'm looking forward to the next chapters.

I really like this story and where it seems to be heading. Like I mentioned in a review to another author, I like scifi, romance and mystery rolled into one. So your story fits the bill. You did extemely well in setting up in your first chapter and it is very original. You have a good imagination.  I look forward to reading more. I started reading your other story Angel but have not really gotten into it yet. You keep up the good work on this intriguing and fascinating tale.

always vote for sesskag no matter what. . so you go girl!

woah baby. 

I am am really liking where this is headed. Very nice setup and I am loving all the background tidbits added in. I cannot wait for the next chapter!

oh..it's seem more interested...

This is pretty interesting! It's great how you did subtle world-nuilding instead of info-dumping. Your description and writing style also compliments the story and makes for an entertaining read. You are doing very well, this being only your third story notwithstanding. I can't wait to read more. The originality of the plot and the setting is also great. Keep up the good work! :)

This looks to be a very promising and amazing fic! Can't wait to see more of these two.

keep it coming!!!