Hello,

your idea with the different stages of Tenseiga is really nice! I believe Sesshoumaru can be really proud that he unlocked the full potential of Tenseiga this soon! And Inuyasha should be damn grateful, because otherwise he would still be dead! :)

I'm kind of wondering why Kikyou's unborn is still healthy. After all the baby died the moment Inuyasha died too. So shouldn't there at least be some kind of damage?

I'm curious to read about the other wishes. Maybe Sesshoumaru was one of them? After all the seal opened the moment Sesshoumaru and Kagone realised that they truly love each other?

I'm looking forward to your next update!

Hello,

I kind of lost track of this story and just catched up by rereading the whole thing. And I have to say it was worth the time! This is such an interesting piece of work! I LOVE your OC's Nurial and Raya and I totally envy the relationship they have! Such a sweet couple.

I'm glad Dragon Blood finally died ... gosh he was even more of a pest than Naraku - and that says a lot! Though I'm glad he wounded Sesshoumaru. Otherwise he wouldn't find the "opportunity" to finally apologise. He really was a jerk!

So Inuyasha died? I'm curious to see whether Sesshoumaru will make it in time or not. And you still haven't told us about the other two wishes! When will Kouga give her Midoriko's letters? ... So many questions I have :)

All in all an interesting story! And I'm looking forward to your next update!

Not sure what happened with the formatting, but its appearing as one giant paragraph.

this is getting to be quite interesting!!! Love the story

Your formatting seems to have broken, it was hard to read the story when the paragraph were all run together.

This was a fantastic update :)

Ohhhh....Midoriko is such a good fighter :)  Good chapter :D

Awesome story

Also CONGRATULATIONS! Good luck, take your time to write, and enjoy your family time, again congrats on the baby!

Wonderful chapter, I cant wait for more! The interaction and detail put into InuYasha's confrontation of Sesshomaru was really enjoyable to read!

Congratulations on the birth of your baby!!! I hope you did not have too much of a hard time birthing your son. Now that the easy part is over. the fun part begins in raising him (and any future kids if this is your first) along with the many trials and tribulations. The fun part is watching them grow and helping them down the path to adulthood, that is the fun and enjoyable part. 

Now to my review of this current chapter. This chapter seemed like more of a filler because not too much happened except Inuyasha being Inuyasha with his confrontation with Sessho concerning Kagome's where abouts. Kagome seems to be getting stronger both physically and emotionally with Midoriko's help. By the time she meets back up with Sessho, she will most likely forgive Sessho (after he does a little begging and groveling in his own prideful and dignified way, after all he does have an image to uphold...lol) and then they can move on to re-establishing their relationship.

I always wondered why Nuriel and Raya never had any children, so now we know and they will finally try to have those children, after the war that is coming.

Nicely written chpater. Looking forward to new updates during your spare time after all family and RL comes first. Nice job!

Thanks for updating and cheers to baby's first month old. :)

Ah good luck with your everything! Lol take care of yourself! And write at your own pacing! We will wait!

Take care!

The poem is beautiful :)  It made me cry. however, it was a nice blessing :)

Go Midoriko with the heart to heart! I look forward to more! (:

A good chapter!  I can see your improvement in writing and plot! It was a touching chapter and the drama made Mt heart ache! Thx for updating! 

Sesshomaru you fool, are you a child! Lashing out like that...

Poor Kagome. I love that the legend she loved was about her all along and that Midoriko is helping her!

Great Chapter!

Now..now sesshomaru what have you done?i wonder where the kibo tree and kagome had went...is she gonna be gone forever? I hope sesshomaru will realized that she was gone and how fool he really was..i hope she is not beyond his reach well I'll just wait for your next update to answer these questions...XD thank you for the updated! xoxo

OMG!! I can't wait till the next chapter!

Wow, what a beautifully sad tale... and it seems to be a legend based off of her no less! I hope Sess gets some sense knocked into him. Poor Kagome.

Wonderful chapter, I can not wait for the next!

Whoa what a great update! I wonder why mrs.higurashi gaves their letters for kagome to sesshomaru instead of handing it directly to kagome? I missed the way sesshomaru flirting with kagome i hope you could write more of that scene...while nuriel and raya in the background teasing the two and at the same time helping  the two  to find their way to each other. 

And oh the bastard is still alive?! Maybe plotting another evil plans..

Goodluck for the next update!

Thank you for updating! Takecare always! Xoxo