This is very different and interesting. That's some major irony too. I have to admit I had to read the end a few times though because I just couldn't stop thinking about being eaten alive bit by bit. It makes me think of the nature documentaries I've watched where a pack of lions take down prey so big they can't snap it's neck or suffocate it quickly, like hippos or smaller elephants. The poor things get pinned down with the lions tearing chunks out of them sometimes for hours before it finally kills them. Being eaten alive has always been at the top of my worst ways to die list. So thanks for giving me nightmares! Really though, other than the gruesome imagery of that part this is a cool idea. I hope you do a second part (or more) to this one.
I like this continuation, and am glad to see you update. I can't wait for the updates to Sundered. In fact, after I post this review I'm going to reread it.
Anyway, the forced bond and Kagome feeling the brunt of all the years of Sesshomaru's emotions and creeping madness was a nice touch. Hojo was irritating, but his presence served a purpose I suppose.
Anywho, can't wait for your next update. Oh, and I think you did spell patience right. I sometimes have trouble with that word, and some other words in general. I think I spell them right, but then I stare and it doesn't look like it's spelled right the more I stare. Then I go look it up to be sure. That can be irritating.
Nice chapter. it’s an interesting idea. Thanks for posting it, and congrats on finishing it and getting it out. I remember you saying you were having trouble with that.
Can’t wait to see what else you post. Good luck.
Gee (Chapter 9) - Mon 11 Mar 2019
Second shot pls~
Sally (Chapter 9) - Sun 10 Mar 2019
Monster Inside looks like it'd make a great story. Now I have to draw Sesshoumau with a beard
Reviewing because... WOW! Sooooooo good. Sooooo precise, so on-point, so... so... yeah. Like that. :D
Thank you for continuing to send us your plunnies! Speaking for myself, I luff them so!!
<3
~~me~~
Dylan (Chapter 8) - Fri 23 Nov 2018
Cute!
I've a big grin on my face now, wonderful!
*twitches* i STILL don't ever get chapter 1 notifications. but this was amazing! love it love it love it!
This has been an interesting read so far. (:
Great update, and congrats on your upcoming baby boy. I hope he enters the world safely.
Eva (Chapter 2) - Fri 03 Jun 2016
This is so real. People can be utterly stupid about relationships. I could read a story based on this.
Oooo will there not be eternity for Kagome n Sesshomaru? Looking forward to the other stories~
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