Very interesting story. Would we ever know why Inuyasha was suppressing her powers? or why he left - other than hoping she'd die (and if that was the case, why)?
Oh yes, she likes, she does... She is well pleased.
And feels so privileged to have a fic writen for her, as well as mentioned.
Might have liked it a wee bit more if she didn't notice a few typos. And some possibly missing comas.
My precious...
I like your concept of writing. It was well written and detailed. I enjoyed how it was a simple story with no drama(besides the war) .
Rhonda (Chapter 1) - Mon 25 Apr 2016
REALLY LOVE this very original story! Looking so forward to seeing how all the different pieces of the backstory on Inuyasha pulls together as well as Kagome's relationship with Sesshoumaru blooms.
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