I really like this! I think it's different to watch Kagome start over again. Earthy and comparably mellow is how I'd describe it, which fits her bill quite well. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Wow. Kagome must have looked down right ugly when she turned into a serpent the way you described her. Does she just randomly change into any kind of youkai? She doesn't seem to change to look like the beast they are fighting, so that's why I am making the assumption that she justs changes into random creatures. Will she continue to change into different beings like a shape-shifter for the rest of her life or will there be a stop to this metamorphing at some point along the way?
The scene where Kei was acting like a drill sargent while he was training her was very funny. It reminded me of my days when I was in the military going through my initial training.
You don't seem to need a beta since you are proofreading on your own. Keep up the great work. More updates please :)
Atta girl Kagome! Look on the bright side! You now have the same number of limbs and two eyes instead of one as an oni! Ha ha! i don't know when you'll stop changing and evolving, but good luck in everything that you do!
I can't wait for chapter three! This is great! soon Kagome will (hopefully) meet up with all of her old friends and impress them (perhaps Smexy Sessy as well???) who knows?
This is so interesting and original just love it.
I see where you started out with 11 chapters of the drabble and then you finally changed it to one chapter and broke it down into separate segments. I liked the way you did that, it was easier to read. This is a very fascinating story so far and it is well written. It is very interesting how Kagome is changing and I am anxious to see what being she will turn out to be and what powers and abilities she will possess. I am looking forward to when she meets up with her old companions and finally Sesshomaru. Kei is a cute and good friend to Kagome. I am glad that she has a companion to travel with and is not alone on this new adventure. It would be nice if she turns into a beautiful Inuyoukai with powers to match Sessho.
Good job and looking forward to more updates soon. Loving this story thus far :)
Well for a flea, I bet that Kagome is a pretty one! I wonder if she will meet up with Myoga? Will he give her some tips or try to court her himself? After all, in the anime series, he thought that she was was hot in her bathing attire! Ha ha! I love this and am going to continue to read since I just had to review after just reading the first chapter! Kagome is just sooo cute!!! Someone needs to draw a picture of little ole' flea Kagome! I would volunteer but I cannot draw! So sad! Quick question. Does she have 2 sets of arms like Myoga did in the series? I would probably freak out a little bit for that as well as for being a tiny flea. Even if it is a demon.
Great little story. I usually don't like the dribbs but there was enough of them to get a good flow to the story. Looking forward to seeing more.
Lammy (Chapter 10) - Fri 15 Apr 2016
What an interesting concept! I am looking forward to the rest of the story.
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