I can umm......I can be your betta if u would like but I don't exactly know what betrays do so if u tell me I'll take the job
Hi, I really want to enjoy your story. It seems interesting as far as I can manage to read but could you possibly consider getting a beta? There are so many grammatical errors as well as other things that it really takes away from the story and I'm sure as a writer, you would love to have your story enjoyed by everyone. Hopefully This doesn't Dissuade you from continuing to write.
best of luck,
TIO
Lammy (Chapter 1) - Sun 03 Apr 2016
Can't wait to read more!
I love it riran. . And i have read it in ff.net XD . . but kinda sad with the ending part. . but then i have to read the epilogue, and totally love it!!
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