Just great loved it.
I have to admit, this was really good. But I see what you mean on how you're not sure how to transition. Though it may not seem like much, I would think that Sesshoumaru would be angry and sad that his soul mate (though still unacknowledged) because she chose Inuyasha resulting in bodily harm to his person. His anger may be a driving force to take the human arm from Naraku and confront Inu and Kags again...like I said, it's just a thought...whatever you decide, I know it will be awesome.
ryoko (Chapter 4) - Thu 04 Feb 2016
good chap
i wonder how kagome survive
Thanks again
tonya (Chapter 4) - Thu 04 Feb 2016
loved the update! please do another one soon
Love it. Love the idea of writing from Sesshomaru pov
Ah! So good as usual. I can't wait for your next update!
Eva (Chapter 3) - Wed 03 Feb 2016
I love that your going with a somewhat skeptical first person narration from Sesshoumaru. The "she made me jealous so I tried to melt her" was priceless.
ryoko (Chapter 3) - Wed 03 Feb 2016
good start
where is naraku, when you need him to attack kagome, so sesshomaru can save her
Saiya (Chapter 3) - Wed 03 Feb 2016
Yet she Lived Mwhahahahahahaa
Love the way you are telling this
tonya (Chapter 3) - Wed 03 Feb 2016
good job, i would like to see some dialogue maybe
Oh the heart wrenching jealousy will just continue for poor Sesshoumaru. Though I can imagine him having an unwanted sense of relief to know she survived his poison... I can't wait for your next update!
Saiya (Chapter 2) - Tue 02 Feb 2016
Shes GOD. . . Bwhahahahahaha I'm Kiddin
tonya (Chapter 2) - Tue 02 Feb 2016
good update. please do so again soon
julia (Chapter 2) - Tue 02 Feb 2016
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