Love it! I think your idea of him stalking them is perfect.
stay with Sesshoumarus point of view for a chapter or... Like where he mets Rin them go to kagomes point of view,
maybe have it to when she first saw sesshoumaru she feels the same pull, how her powered saved her and how her own heart had a a painful
twist he fled away, that could be one chapter and her adventures another chapter
love how you have it going it's good update soon
I really like how you ended this segment. I don have any ideas of what you could do next though ????. It's been a long time since I watched the anime as well... I do like the idea of his lurking and scheming in the shadows though. Whatever you decide I know will be awesome! Good luck!
After InuYasha takes his arm, Sara and Asane castle are next.You don't see until a later time where he actually goes. You could have him lurk in the shadows and stalk them and show up when his presence is required! LOL!!!!keep it up!! U can do it!!!!
Saiya (Chapter 5) - Sat 06 Feb 2016
So Cute
tonya (Chapter 5) - Fri 05 Feb 2016
good chapter
I look forward to seeing how you interpret Sesshoumaru's actions through the story. Gambite!
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