Cute story so far!

Just for a grammatical crit, watch your use of 'was'.  I saw several instances of "we was" or "they was" within the text.  As "was" is used in the singular past tense of "being", you want to use it with he/she/I.  For plural we/they, you'll want to go with "were".

Scrive molto bene spero che aggiorni piu spesso. 

More, keep it coming.

How God Created Mother

Good took the fragrance of a flower,
The majesty of a tree,
The gentleness of a morning a dew
The calm of a quiet sea,
The beauty of a twilight hour
The soul of a starry night
The laughter of the rippling brook,
The grace of a bird in flight,
Then God fashioned from these things
A creation like no other,
And when His masterpiece was through,
He called it simply...MOTHER.

Happy Mother's Day!

There are Angels
God put on this Earth
Who care for us and guide us.
You can feel their love and gentleness as they walk through life beside us.
They do great things for us every day they whisper in our ears, they even hold us in their hearts when we are filled with all our fears.
They are always there to give us a hug and try to make us smile.
They treat us with the respect and love, they treat us like their own child.
God blessed me with an Angel, I’m proud to call my own.
She’s been with me throughout my life, been with me as I’ve grown.
She’s guided me the best she can, she’s taught me like no other, and I’m thankful I’m the lucky one who get’s to call her
Mother

Interesting but weird relationships due to the OOC behavior.

I hope to read more soon !

loved it XD

Great update, I hope another chapter comes out soon.

Hmmm, a good Naruka, it was quite pleasant to read him in such a way.  Is this an all human fanfic?