LOL the ending, and the authors note too. I agree by the way, people who havent seen Firefly GO WATCH IT! Lovely chapter, the whole date is adorable and so suited to how they are portrayed in your universe!
Drianax (Chapter 21) - Tue 09 Aug 2016
Great chaptear! I loved the intimacy between Sess and Kag . please update soon! I'll give you vertual cookies.g
Leticia (Chapter 21) - Tue 09 Aug 2016
Im so glad they went out finally, im excited for the next chapter
I am enjoying this story so very much. I foresee reading it again and again. This chapter had me smiling from beginning to end. Thank you.
You're a browncoat!!! So wonderful to meet a fellow Browncoat!
This is a great story. I am always so eager to read new chapters in it. I am eagerly anticipating the next chapter!
Yay. They finally went on their date. I was so impressed how Sesshomaru flew them them instead of driving. I am so glad that Kagome had discussed her fears to him and she is slowly opening up to him. I enjoyed how the pack watched them while they were kissing each other outside. Loved it.
Wid0w (Chapter 20) - Wed 27 Jul 2016
Hey, one thing: I was reading through the story (I love this story a lot) and in the second chapter, you referred to Lorenzo as "Matteo."
I am in love with these background chapters. It brings each member of the pack into their own!
Yay! Tried to stay up to read it last night, but that didn't work. What am excellent chapter!! BTW there's some paranthesis in the chapter I think may be part of an edit? I wish we could have gotten more of Lucia's background in this chapter, but oh well.
Wid0w (Chapter 20) - Tue 26 Jul 2016
I'm back! I adore this story. I love how you've written peck dynamics, it seems really genuine and it's very unique for this community. I'm glad you didn't shy away from it. Are we going to see Lorenzo in the present? I think it would be really interesting to see how he, Carlo, and Lucia interact with one another now.
Omg. Such. Beautiful background chapter I cried. It was so good
omg I need a tissue. It was a good cry too. I loved it
OMG FANTASTIC! What a great backstory for these two!
I had to read threw all of it before I reviewed. I'm in love with this story. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Niomi (Chapter 19) - Fri 22 Jul 2016
Love this story! love your style of writing, love the concept, love the characters! Lovelovelove. Its hard to come across original characters that I like, but they all have such a loveable personality. Everything just blends well. Keep it up!
Well done! I do like how Kagome is encouraging Eito not to try to push Nat out of his life but rather admit she's still an important part of it. I'm looking forward to Kagome and Sesshoumaru's date.
I love this chapter!! I feel like I'm loving Eito more and more as the chapters go by. He has this charm about him that makes me want to give him a big hug, and kiss him like Kagome did, at the same time. I must say I'm impressed with all the original characters you came up with, it's a great joy to read their story then watch them develop. You did an amazing job with this story!!
snow (Chapter 19) - Tue 19 Jul 2016
i love the story her progress is wonderful and I simply love each character.
I really like this story...it was a little hard to chew at first but like a champ I chomped down on that bish and took a big bite. However I just know some shit is about to hit the fan! Someone is going to get jealous dammit ! And me thinks it's going to be either Eito or Sesshoumaru!
Question:
can the pack have children with someone other than their mate ??
Lea (Chapter 19) - Tue 19 Jul 2016
aw yay! more stuff about Eito! he sure is an interesting character and im glad kagome was able to see her progress. i know she tends to be hard on herself in this story so im glad sango is there to point out the obvious. cant wait for the date with sessho!
Yay. I am glad that Kagome and Eito had gone out on a date. They both had been thru a lot. It is good to see that each pack member understand one another. I cannot wait until Sesshomaru and Kagome have there official date. I am lovin this.
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