You led me to this sight from fanfiction.net, and I can honestly say I don't regret coming here, I love your writing stile and the fact that all the characters in your stories are open to all forms of love, it warms my heart.
Thank you.
i believe i told you that you are in my top five most fav authors, i read EVERYTHING you write, everything and i adore your style. what i say now is not flame its just critique ok? from a curious reader.
i want to see more of kagome. you write evryone's background except hers. we have only the general idea of her marriage and god why did she ever marry him? was she as weak as you point? because a person that is so strong now couldn't be so weak earlier and just give up no? my opinion only. now she demands of sesshoumaru that he doesn't grab her hair in that process but koga did it? did she fight? did she go along with it? i dont see all of her sorry. at times she is so strong at times no, so its confusing and yes i know that healing in these cases is hard, i have experience. my fiance(yes we wanted to marry thank god i left when i did) gave me a slap and i left him the same day, second day my luggage was also gone. i also got stalked by him afterwards so i know what i am talking about thats why i say i dont "see" kagome completely, so please accept a request of a humble reader and write more about her inner self and past.
on other note thx a lot for u[dating and spoiling us! take care and good luck!
This is the first and only story I have ever felt the need to review for . I have been reading fanfictions for over 10 years and have never read a story as good as yours. I just wanted to let you know that I read faithly and come to dokuga everyday just to see if you have updated the story. You are a great writer and I hope you are proud of your work. I'm not really sure what you're supposed to say in a review but you're amazing and I just wanted to let you know that. Keep writing and I'll keep reading. :)
Koree (Chapter 24) - Wed 14 Sep 2016
I really enjoy your story , i'm not bothered by all the sex ethier only thing that gets me from time to time is Sesshomaru being more of the submissive one who receives . He's always written to be dominant so i always have this hardcore demanding macho man image of him so it is weird to read that he's on the receiving end but it's not bad anywho love the story :)
Great chapter!
Deana (Chapter 24) - Tue 13 Sep 2016
Awesome chapter! More please.
The ending of the chapter was heartbreaking. Thank you for updating so regularly, it gives me something to look forward to every week!
I need MOAR!! Ugh. I want to know what they know and and and....Alright I'm feeling a bit like the Little Mermaid. this was a very well done chapter and that lemon was steamy! Well done and I can't wait for the next update!!
GLORIOUS. This is everything I wanted and more. I can't wait for more updates!!!!!!!! I'm seriously a crazy person that checks your Instagram/Dokuga multiple times a day even though I KNOW you said you would post on Monday. But regardless, I can't stop myself by hoping that maybe something will pop up! Anyways - can't wait to learn more about KaugraXSesshy, is this going to ruin her friendship with Kagome? How are they going to figure out the poison? What's with KikyoXInuyasha? (or maybe nothing there?) AND OBVIOUSLY - how Sesshy and Kagome are going to continue their courting..... *_* Can't wait for the next chapter!!!!
Elspeth (Chapter 24) - Mon 12 Sep 2016
Yassss! SMUUUUUUUUUUUT!!! GLORIOUS SMUUUUUUT! Can't wait for the next update. Now, where did my drool catching bib go to.....
Yay for the update. Yay for the sexual dinamic of the pack. Yay for talking to the lords finally. Yay for so many things. Can't wait for the next chapter!!!
Eva (Chapter 22) - Thu 08 Sep 2016
I'm really enjoying these backgrounds. Taichi and Sachi are too cute. I'm sorry for spamming your reviews. I have had a rough couple of weeks and am just now getting caught up. Your story is quite the reward.
Eva (Chapter 21) - Thu 08 Sep 2016
I love your head cannon for Kagome. She has great taste in shows.in glad she didn't deny that Him saving her was Part of the reason she loves him. There are so many more reasons.
Eva (Chapter 19) - Thu 08 Sep 2016
This story is so rich. I appreciate that the process of recovery isn't all about Kagome. I can imagine losing my own mate as we have come way too close for comfort. I love Eito's character and long for him to find hapiness again.
Eva (Chapter 18) - Thu 08 Sep 2016
I was so happy to see Shippou. I like to think of his happy with his father and since this is AU, why not? I understand using Kikiyo as you have. I'm kind of hoping it isn't actually her since that would be so obvious. She can't help it. She's just written that way.
Eva (Chapter 17) - Thu 08 Sep 2016
There are many different and equally beautiful kinds of love. I think that some of us at least read these fictions because we wish we had the freedom from cultural and societal restraints to be able to form these bonds in our real lives. This was beautiful in an aching sort of way.
Eva (Chapter 16) - Thu 08 Sep 2016
The kind of trauma Is gone has been through leaves people deeply wounded. The slow, careful encouragement her pack is showing her will help her heal with minimal scarring.
Eva (Chapter 15) - Thu 08 Sep 2016
I'm so glad you're doing these vignettes with the pack's backstories. You are quite skilled at painting a picture of relationship dynamics in a short space.
Well this was definitely an interesting take.... you have my undivided attention.
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