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Kanda (Chapter 18) - Wed 19 Apr 2017

another chapter well done! though i was disappointed at no sesshoumaru showing up, but! at least i know now what's going on on the other side. bruh, i really wann know who that shadow is and how sess was so familiar with it. and to see if it's the person i think it is! you have a way of making me second guess. D:< anyway, thank you fer updating! i can't wait fer the next chapter! hope all goes well with you and yer family. :)


natalia (Chapter 18) - Wed 19 Apr 2017

Oh so frustrating! The shadow is just playing! And is sesshoumaru immune to this power? I still don't know well why he was late in saving kagome! Also that kyioshi!!!! Argh so frustrating! So curious for the next chapter! Thx for updating!


Jean (Chapter 17) - Wed 05 Apr 2017

Wonderful update, I loved it! I can't remember Kagome ever riding Ah-Un before. Can't wait for the next update! 


Kanda (Chapter 17) - Mon 27 Mar 2017

sesshoumaru can be such an ass, he IS giving mixed signals. and even if he doesn't realize it, he don't needa be an ass! miscommunication is a pain in the ass, too! and she needs to apologize fer real! anyway, great chapter. i can't wait fer more!:D


natalia (Chapter 17) - Sun 26 Mar 2017

Er I don't know where to start! The scene with crows being obliterated was awesome! I could practically see it in anime style! Swish swish and he remaining stoic and still clean! Then the scene where he is watching the stars and kagome is watching him... Breathtaking! It was so well depicted and how he was alone and so dramatic and perfect...I may get inspired From that scene to write a fic! And the clothes he brought for her if that isn't a claim I don't know what it is! Lol! But how he is secretive and protective but still angry for some reason... I wonder what that reason is... He knows about that fishy kiyoshi but wants her to find out for herself maybe? Since she has such a good heart and only sees the good so until it will snap her in the face so to say... That kiyoshi is obsessed and i don't like him at all! My intuition is telling me he has a biiiiiiiig secret! The chapter was amazing! Only one observation and not in bad light ok? The problem i have in my writing is with pov I kept switching them too often! I got an advice from a English teacher and note! It's not necessarily true or bad but the whole chapter was from kagome's pov then you added a sesshoumaru pov in the mix. If you want to add make them longer since it felt his was too short in the chapter! I know that the omnipotent pov is awesome i like it too! But it was just confused for the structure. For the emotional and descriptive and romantic part it was absolutely amazing! But maybe just maybe his pov should be longer! It's an advice take it or ignore it! Either way it was one of the best chapters to date! Compliments! Thx a bunch for updating! Take care! Good luck!


rin (Chapter 17) - Sun 26 Mar 2017

I can't wait to read some more of this amazing story. I love the detail and depth that you use, I love it!


Leaora (Chapter 17) - Sun 26 Mar 2017

You are such a tease! All this will they or won't they is wonderful and frustrating at the same time. Please update again soon.


xoMIA ;) (Chapter 17) - Sun 26 Mar 2017

Xoxo


natalia (Chapter 16) - Sat 25 Mar 2017

Mmmmmm isn't that the same chapter!? I am confused since i already remember it! Did you just rewrite it? Either way i can't wait for the big secret plot to bloom and find out who this kiyoshi is!


Kinkyfairy33 (Chapter 16) - Sun 12 Mar 2017

I LOVE this story!! There is so much mystery and I can't guess it! Please update soon!


SonataSongbird (Chapter 16) - Sat 11 Mar 2017

Aw man, a cliffhanger!!! Can't wait for your next chapter, this is absolutely amazing!!!!! :D


Kanda (Chapter 16) - Wed 08 Mar 2017

omg. yer one of those ppl! the ones that build up the hype and then! the chapter ends! agh! i am left in suspense! this story is so good. another rare find and i bow at yer skills. *bow* v.v please update soon! i have been dying to know wtf sess has been up to since last chapter, fan. 


Nicole (Chapter 16) - Mon 06 Mar 2017

Awesome chapter! Can't wait to read the next chapter to find out if Sesshomaru ends up killing Hiko. 


natalia (Chapter 16) - Mon 06 Mar 2017

Soooo sesshoumaru was always close by, but when she actually needs saving he was not close. And no one saw another group coming to the village... That's weird... Funny how kagome always gets kidnapped! Poor soul! Even if she trained she still can't escape these situations! Hopefully everything will be resolved sooner than later! Thx for updating!Will eagerly wait for next chapter!


xoMIA ;) (Chapter 16) - Sun 05 Mar 2017

Those question marks are hearts hehe


xoMIA ;) (Chapter 16) - Sun 05 Mar 2017

Yay it's so good wooooo!!! ??????


Nathaniel z Alexandria (Chapter 15) - Sat 31 Dec 2016

Happy New Years! 

It's new years in my country. cookbook, where's the new chapter?


Nathaniel z Alexandria (Chapter 14) - Fri 23 Dec 2016

   " Suddenly the shrill cry of a lark broke the strained atmosphere, bringing Kagome back to her senses."

Why lark, why ?!

Anyway, I believe  that the shadow killed the monks, and that the shadow is kiyoshi, or belongs to him. if you put 2+2 together you get ????. The monks are after kiyoshi, two of the monks that were after him died going after the shadow on orders. Then the cryptic messages from both Sesshomaru and Satoru, telling Kagome to watch those around her. And then there was a moment  where Kiyoshi acted very shady while talking  to Kaede. My thoughts were confirmed when the shadow showed lust. Kiyoshi adores or likes Kagome. The shadow said "Shadows are just a projection of the true form, intangible, without substance."  This could  be Kiyoshi's true nature. Plus how he reacted when Kagome went to wake him up the second time and how he grabbed her. I could be wrong I'm only a teenager.


Nathaniel z Alexandria (Chapter 7) - Fri 23 Dec 2016

   "Miles away, deep in a forest black as night and dense as fog, a lone figure made its way through the thick brush and twigs, cursing and muttering as they trekked.  No light from the moon above filtered through the trees to the forest floor, limiting visibility to just mere feet and the figure cursed again when they tripped on a particular nasty branch, nearly falling flat on their face.  Picking themselves up and dusting off their clothing, they resumed their march, anxious to reach their destination and escape the oppressively dark forest.  Even for a forest at night, the sounds of nature were sparse and limited, muffled and eerie in the calls.  A frog's call came out long, low and guttural, an owl’s chittering sounded more like snarls and snaps, and a boar’s growl was low and feral.  A sudden snarl to the figures left had him yelping in fear and surprise, clutching at their chest that panted with labored breathing." 

This was beautiful.


Zeelian (Chapter 11) - Thu 22 Dec 2016

Daiyoukai is the correct term with "Dai" meaning big/great

Tai on the other hand is a kind of fish. 


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