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REDWOLF (Chapter 19) - Fri 09 Jun 2017

I feel like Kiyoshi is in league with this Shadow. Just seems strange that the being with the Monks was not there and yet, where is Kiyoshi? Sesshoumaru is acting off too, but, I believe he's not got exactly what he needs to kill the creature or the one with "great" power to destory Youkai. Well, I am hooked on the fic.  Can't wait for the next update.


KShadeslady (Chapter 14) - Thu 01 Jun 2017

Wonderful chapter! That shadow is snarky and sure of himself. Sigh, why can't Sessh just give her a straight answer? So many suppositions going through my head. Cheers and Thanks!


KShadeslady (Chapter 12) - Wed 31 May 2017

LOL...Short?? Your chapters are amazingly long...all of them! Hmm, is that really Sessh? Wow! Great story!


Sejal Patel (Chapter 19) - Tue 23 May 2017

Love this story!! I can't wait till your next update. Do you plan on Inuyasha and the new inuyokai female getting together? I hope so! 


KShadeslady (Chapter 11) - Fri 19 May 2017

Great chapter! There are too many questions with few straight answers. Still not trusting Kiyoshi or his motives yet. Thanks so much. 


KShadeslady (Chapter 10) - Fri 19 May 2017

Sigh...that boy will never learn, but these encounters do provide satisfying entertainment. 


KShadeslady (Chapter 9) - Fri 19 May 2017

Wonderful chapter. Not sure I totally trust Kiyoshi yet, but that will play out as we go along. Looking forward to the next chapter. These are really nice long chapters. You are spoiling me. 


KShadeslady (Chapter 7) - Thu 18 May 2017

Wonderful chapter. Looking forward to the next chapter. 


KShadeslady (Chapter 6) - Wed 17 May 2017

This is a wonderful story. You have really laid it out very thoughtfully. I love how it is progressing. 


KShadeslady (Chapter 4) - Wed 17 May 2017

Whew! A nice visit with Sango and some interesting revelations. Close call for the girls. Sessh to the rescue. Nice chapter. 


KShadeslady (Chapter 3) - Wed 17 May 2017

Another lovely chapter. Loved the visit with Jinenji. Inu is a Baka! And Sessh is ...ummm...scouting out the territory? Thanks!


KShadeslady (Chapter 2) - Wed 17 May 2017

Lovely long chapter. Thanks so much. Looking forward to reading more of your story. 


Natalia (Chapter 19) - Tue 16 May 2017

Way I absolutely liked inu,s struggle and inner battle! I feel like you gave us some pointers lol! About the shadow!  Thx for updating! Can't wait for more!

P.s one detail, it's kirara not kiara.


xoMIA ;) (Chapter 19) - Tue 16 May 2017

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Kanda (Chapter 18) - Wed 19 Apr 2017

another chapter well done! though i was disappointed at no sesshoumaru showing up, but! at least i know now what's going on on the other side. bruh, i really wann know who that shadow is and how sess was so familiar with it. and to see if it's the person i think it is! you have a way of making me second guess. D:< anyway, thank you fer updating! i can't wait fer the next chapter! hope all goes well with you and yer family. :)


Natalia (Chapter 18) - Wed 19 Apr 2017

Oh so frustrating! The shadow is just playing! And is sesshoumaru immune to this power? I still don't know well why he was late in saving kagome! Also that kyioshi!!!! Argh so frustrating! So curious for the next chapter! Thx for updating!


Jean (Chapter 17) - Wed 05 Apr 2017

Wonderful update, I loved it! I can't remember Kagome ever riding Ah-Un before. Can't wait for the next update! 


Kanda (Chapter 17) - Mon 27 Mar 2017

sesshoumaru can be such an ass, he IS giving mixed signals. and even if he doesn't realize it, he don't needa be an ass! miscommunication is a pain in the ass, too! and she needs to apologize fer real! anyway, great chapter. i can't wait fer more!:D


Natalia (Chapter 17) - Sun 26 Mar 2017

Er I don't know where to start! The scene with crows being obliterated was awesome! I could practically see it in anime style! Swish swish and he remaining stoic and still clean! Then the scene where he is watching the stars and kagome is watching him... Breathtaking! It was so well depicted and how he was alone and so dramatic and perfect...I may get inspired From that scene to write a fic! And the clothes he brought for her if that isn't a claim I don't know what it is! Lol! But how he is secretive and protective but still angry for some reason... I wonder what that reason is... He knows about that fishy kiyoshi but wants her to find out for herself maybe? Since she has such a good heart and only sees the good so until it will snap her in the face so to say... That kiyoshi is obsessed and i don't like him at all! My intuition is telling me he has a biiiiiiiig secret! The chapter was amazing! Only one observation and not in bad light ok? The problem i have in my writing is with pov I kept switching them too often! I got an advice from a English teacher and note! It's not necessarily true or bad but the whole chapter was from kagome's pov then you added a sesshoumaru pov in the mix. If you want to add make them longer since it felt his was too short in the chapter! I know that the omnipotent pov is awesome i like it too! But it was just confused for the structure. For the emotional and descriptive and romantic part it was absolutely amazing! But maybe just maybe his pov should be longer! It's an advice take it or ignore it! Either way it was one of the best chapters to date! Compliments! Thx a bunch for updating! Take care! Good luck!


rin (Chapter 17) - Sun 26 Mar 2017

I can't wait to read some more of this amazing story. I love the detail and depth that you use, I love it!


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