I too think that the blush on her cheek is lovely and her eyes are very arresting, with pretty lashes. She has a very cool gaze and I like it a lot.
If I could respectfully add that on the side of things that could be improved, I feel that being able to see the background swirly pattern through her hair is a bit odd and distracting. That is only my own humble opinion of course. In general I feel this picture is well on it's way to coming to life with only a few small changes, just as Arg Pirates suggested. Well done and keep it up.
I think your coloring is good! My favorite is the delicate quality of the blush on her cheeks. I also love the eyelashes!
I guess on the front of constructive criticism, I'd mention the extra lines in the sleeve and shoulder that could be cleaned up. It would also probably benefit this drawing to have some line variation, which is like thicker lines in certain curved areas, as well as thicker lines closer to the foreground. It can really make something pop. I see it already happening in the area of the eyes!
I've said this before in the lineart comment, but I LOVE how much this reminds me of the Princess Bride.
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If I could respectfully add that on the side of things that could be improved, I feel that being able to see the background swirly pattern through her hair is a bit odd and distracting. That is only my own humble opinion of course. In general I feel this picture is well on it's way to coming to life with only a few small changes, just as Arg Pirates suggested. Well done and keep it up.
I guess on the front of constructive criticism, I'd mention the extra lines in the sleeve and shoulder that could be cleaned up. It would also probably benefit this drawing to have some line variation, which is like thicker lines in certain curved areas, as well as thicker lines closer to the foreground. It can really make something pop. I see it already happening in the area of the eyes!
I've said this before in the lineart comment, but I LOVE how much this reminds me of the Princess Bride.