Kissing scenes are very difficult to create. You did relatively well; I liked how you shaped the noses. The only few constructive criticism I have are the lack of detail in both Kagome’s and Sesshomaru’s hair. My suggestion is for you to go to deviantart.com and look up some tutorials to help you (This will improve your skills as an artist), and Kagome's lips. The upper portion seems extremely dark and slightly out of proportion and has an awkward look. I'd add more gloss, and trim down the the smeared lipstick look. Just some advice. Very good work though.

Ja-ne