I like it so far.

a very good beginning. i was skeptic when i read the summary, but I love the simple, yet poignant voice you give Rin. Please update soon; I'll be waiting.

Love it!!!!  I hope you can update soon this is a fantastic fanfic.

Intriguing story. How old is Rin at the time she is telling her story? She seems very mature. Nice writing. I hope you keep this story going and can hardly wait for next update. Great job!