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Zeelian (Chapter 27) - Thu 19 Nov 2015

Looking good sofar, but 27 could use an extra proofread.

Singular of allies is "ally"
Fowl = A category of birds (chickens, turkey, duck/geese, phesant, peafowl  & such), Disgusting = Foul

Would be eaten, not ate (think there was a few simmilar ones in 28/29 aswell)


roberta. (Chapter 29) - Thu 19 Nov 2015

Oh poor she forgot about smell.


Saiya (Chapter 29) - Thu 19 Nov 2015

hehehe


Pamela (Chapter 29) - Thu 19 Nov 2015

Haha! Wonder what Kagome got herself into:)


beachvilla (Chapter 28) - Wed 18 Nov 2015

Hehe drunk Sesshomaru. Now that he has permission to ask to snuggle, wonder if he will take advantage of it. 

Cant wait for the next update.  


LadyFugue (Chapter 28) - Wed 18 Nov 2015

I feel like I was just teased, the images.... Omg.... Please continue haha. 


Didie (Chapter 28) - Wed 18 Nov 2015

It is what I think it is? I hope I'll get it right! Sesshoumaru 'mistake' at chapter 28, made his and Kagome's relationship questionable, and her honor in stake... sooo... hmm... what our honorable ruler do to save an honor of his valuable ally...? Nyahahahaha.... *evil laugh*


roberta. (Chapter 28) - Wed 18 Nov 2015

Personal I would have taken another look ( smile)


Saiya (Chapter 28) - Wed 18 Nov 2015

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA he Stripped NAKED into HER Bed so Priceless.


Pamela (Chapter 28) - Wed 18 Nov 2015

Ah haha! Sesshoumaru is a naughty doggie. That was hilarious and steamy all at the same time. Woohoo! I like how they are getting closer and how Sess is a big snuggle bunny where Kagome is concerned. I imagine that was quite a surprise for Kagome to feel Sess pressed against her and after she had such an intense dream, care to share what Kagome's dream was about. Great chapters.


Debra (Chapter 28) - Wed 18 Nov 2015

Great chapter! Sesshoumaru got naked and slipped in her bed, too awesome! Love that she told him next time to just ask. I guess she doesn't mind as long as she isn't surprised.


Saiya (Chapter 27) - Wed 18 Nov 2015

Aawwww hehehehe


roberta. (Chapter 26) - Fri 13 Nov 2015

Sesshy just being himself lol


Saiya (Chapter 26) - Fri 13 Nov 2015

Awwww


Pamela (Chapter 26) - Thu 12 Nov 2015

I love how her kimono is representative of her standing as the Shikon Miko. I would love to know what Sess is really thinking in his head:) poor Kagome is stuck with Mr. Icypants, hehe


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 26) - Thu 12 Nov 2015

Nice, keep it coming.


Mona (Chapter 26) - Thu 12 Nov 2015

Great update, hope more is to come soon.


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 25) - Thu 12 Nov 2015

Keep it coming.


roberta. (Chapter 25) - Thu 12 Nov 2015

Thanks for the update.


Pamela (Chapter 25) - Wed 11 Nov 2015

I love this story. Nice chapter with them meeting in his personal library. The poetry line was perfect, indeed, so hilarious. Way to ruin the mood Jaken. Excited for the ball and what she will wear and how her and Sess will interact:) it's making me a little to giddy, haha!


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