I look forward to reading more a seeing what goes on. Between her seeshomaru, sango and shippo
First of all, welcome to Dokuga. :) I'm pretty new here myself. :P
now on to the story...wow when you mentioned rape..I was like ' Oh no Sesshoumaru and Kagome are going to have a rough start and I will probably go through the torture of reading a few more chapters before I can see any progress in their relationship...but OMG Miroku and Inuyasha raping Kagome :O :O :O I was SHOCKED!! This is the first that I am reading a fanfiction with such a twist.
I am really excited to read how she is going to meet Sesshoumaru, under what circumstances they will start to travel together, and how they will grow close..I hope later on Sesshoumaru gives a good beating to Miroku and Inuyasha...oh what about Sango?
Overall, I like your writing style and there was no spelling or grammatical errors either, so that's awesome! Please do update soon and yeah with longer chapters. (^.^)
Mona (Chapter 1) - Sat 03 Oct 2015
Not a fan of forced intimacy but I will continue to read and hope I wont have to read another scene similar to it.
I wonder where was Sango and Shippo? And I'm surprised no one came to the scene, be it demon, because of their heightened senses, or human.
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