Reviews for Impromptu by angel

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Selenityhyperion (Chapter 14) - Fri 10 Jun 2016

OMG Shippo isn't a kid?! But so very adorable that Sesshy asked Shippo - looovvvviiinnnggg it!!


Selenityhyperion (Chapter 13) - Fri 10 Jun 2016

kfjvbekjhb That was freaking HILARIOUS!!!!! Now I know Rin is gonna get involved!!!


Selenityhyperion (Chapter 12) - Fri 10 Jun 2016

HAWT HAWT HAWT!!!!

 

that is all.


Selenityhyperion (Chapter 11) - Fri 10 Jun 2016

OGFNOERGERKBIG SO CUTE!!!

 

I would just love to be Kagome right now with those pups!!! If kids were like them, I'd be so freaking prolific it isn't even funny!

 

Btw, I LOVE Sesshy  losing control. So cute!


Selenityhyperion (Chapter 10) - Fri 10 Jun 2016

Oh poor Rin.... I love that her parents were watching over her and that she was able to overcome her grief. Splendid chapter!


Selenityhyperion (Chapter 9) - Fri 10 Jun 2016

OH poor poor Rin... I wonder if the storms have something to do with why she's with Sesshy instead of her family. So sweet of Kagome to help out and the pups are just too darling!


Selenityhyperion (Chapter 8) - Fri 10 Jun 2016

HAHAHAHA That was an AWESOME chapter! I love it when Sesshy's beast gets involved!!!

 

Also, phew that was hawt!!


Selenityhyperion (Chapter 7) - Fri 10 Jun 2016

Awww Sesshy doens't like being excluded hahahaha

 

 

Great chapter - so cute!


Selenityhyperion (Chapter 6) - Fri 10 Jun 2016

I can just see Rin's matchmaking wheels turning!! This chapter was sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo cute!!!! Aboslutely adorable and loveable! Great job!


Selenityhyperion (Chapter 5) - Fri 10 Jun 2016

Awwww such a cute little chapter! Perfect addition - not too long, not too short. Though I typically prefer longer chapter, this was perfect!


Selenityhyperion (Chapter 4) - Fri 10 Jun 2016

HAHAHAHA Loved it all!!! I can totally envision EVERYTHING here!!!


Selenityhyperion (Chapter 3) - Fri 10 Jun 2016

I know I have read this story before BUT I'm not sure if I reviewed...soo.... more reviews!!! I have forgotten a lot of the story so I'm looking forward to re-reading it!!

 

Awesome job thus far!!! It makes me wonder about Rin's age and her having lived with him for 5 years. Such a cute chapter, though! I love Kagome!!!


Melissa (Chapter 33) - Sat 09 Apr 2016

Love how you threw Marcus Croesus in there. Great reference!!!


Seluna Maru (Chapter 14) - Mon 04 Apr 2016

Oh my things got serious


Seluna Maru (Chapter 6) - Mon 04 Apr 2016

This was.......cute. I don't know how else to put it. It seemed straight out an anime, I felt like I was watching one. I could practically see Shippo's sweat drop and expressions. 

 

-Signed 

-Honest Reviewer -_- 


Seluna Maru (Chapter 1) - Mon 04 Apr 2016

Ms.Hated reviewer here to say this is wonderful!  You've gainned the audience attention so easily with the pups and your amazig story structure. You set a nice pace and tone for the story. If after the first chapter I can't stop reading, you've done a fabulous job

 

-Signed

The Honest Reviewer -_-


maru'sningenluvr19 (Chapter 44) - Fri 25 Mar 2016

this story was so good it took me a day and a half to finish it. Of course i had to sleep, but if sleep was out i would have finished in 24 hrs. i must say that you did very well on the lemons. had me think'n i was the one mated to sesshy-kun instead of gome-chan. i felt the love btwn these two characters and the love she felt for the children. i'm glad you added the taisho and higurashi family to the plot b/c it wouldnt have felt like a family bonding story if you didnt. keep writing like this and i'll be sure to look for more of your fanfics in the future. great writing. c'ya'


roberta. (Chapter 44) - Thu 24 Mar 2016

Such a wonderful ending.Thank you


Saiya (Chapter 44) - Thu 24 Mar 2016

So Awsome


Eva (Chapter 44) - Thu 24 Mar 2016

I've enjoyed this sweet story. Thank you for sharing your inspiaration with us. You've grown so much as a writer throughout the course of your narrative. It's time for you to summarize the plot for the story description. You can do this.


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