Wow just wow. It's a good dark I love it
I like it so far, but I beg of you one thing, please don't make this predictable, I want to cheer you on, I love the raw feeling of the beginning. The cat and mouse aspect of it too, but I only like that because the mouse always seems to get away, if your going to make this dark please don't cast her in a role of stupid,helpless,weak and predictable victim. She should be something of a master mind, and the game they play should be something like chess. I love a good twist, predictable is boring, for once I would love to see a villian Kagome. But ether way I love it :)
Interesting, and quite nice. Make me wonder how this will go. Thanks for sharing! ;)
Saiya (Chapter 2) - Sun 01 Nov 2015
wow .
This sounds good, better you update it asap
Haven (Chapter 2) - Sat 31 Oct 2015
I love it!
Mona (Chapter 2) - Sat 31 Oct 2015
Seems interesting but I must say I am dreading to read how dark this fic is. Also, I hope this isn't just dark and cruel for Kagome, I have read so many stories where she is the victim in these dark tics and for once I would like to read one where she is not the victim. She is a strong and powerful character, I just hope for once it is portrayed and NOT of her being beaten, violated physically, emotionally and sexually, she does not fit the submissive character but that of a strong independent warrior.
maria (Chapter 1) - Sun 04 Oct 2015
Mooooorrrreeee
This story sounds interesting, keep it coming.
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