It is truly a testament to your writing skills that I can read just 3 chapters over and over again so happily and eagerly. But please, take me out my misery lol. Looking forward to your story growing.
Loving the story, hope for more updates
Kimmy (Chapter 3) - Thu 09 Apr 2020
Truly excited to read more of this!
Please update soon i really like this and wish to read more
i love how you portray each of your characters. The story plot is going so well, too. i hope you'll continue updating this story!
Next chapter please.
Please update soon. I can't wait to read more. Is Kagomee going to tun into a demon because of Sesshoumaru's dad? I love it so far and I am looking forward to what happens next.
On please update soon. I like this story. Is it also on ff.net?
Hello, air do not often comment on stories I prefer to read and appreciate the writers imagination, however I must say your plot, detail and work on this story is excellent; It has great at potential and I look forward to reading it. Update soon!
I am eagerly waiting on an update for this. It was so well written and the plot is refreshing! Lovely job!
Wow!! This is amazing!!
So so we know the cliffnotes version of the attack. We know that few people knew Kagome to still be alive, as shown by Hayate being surprised at seeing her alive and moving. We know Kagome cares deeply for Rin, and we know that that affection is equally returned. We know that Sesshomaru's father has left Kagome with a gift... It looks to be some portion of youkai. Not enough to obviously change her status as a human, but enough that she will gain wisdom and knowledge( I am presuming customs and general knowledge known to youkai at least). So she will be neither fully human nor will she be a youkai. Having parts of both makes her a hanyou of sorts.
Anyway. Now I'm just rambling... Anyway this is amazing and I cannot wait to see more in the future!
Also, Kagome's death scene was brilliant!!
Loved it
Loving, loving, LOVING this story! I cannot wait for more! Very original and well written - brava! ~Sandreline
I like your story so far.
Why didn't you have Kagome tell Sesshomaru about her conversation? The one with the male youkai that took place just before Seeshomaru brought Kagome back to life.
Emily (Chapter 3) - Mon 10 Aug 2015
Can't wait for more!
Very interesting. Can't wait to see what happens next.
I enjoyed reading these chapters. I found the dialogue between Sesshoumaru and his Alpha to be amusing. One of the things I like most is Kagome character. She has the discipline of a warrior but is not inviscible. I detest when Kagome is made to be some super-human bad-ass chick who never struggles in a fight. I find that completely unrealistic and unrelatable. So this character development of Kagome that you have is awesome.
Anyway, I eagerly look forward to you next chapter.
-Moonlit Rose
Very intriguing and I like the pace of the story. As well as the length of the chapters. Thank you for making Kagome formidable. She has her own power and she knows how to protect herself. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Coastin (Chapter 3) - Mon 10 Aug 2015
I woke up in the middle of the night and couldn't sleep so i went on here to read and i found your story and i literally read all three chapters at 4:00 in the monring instead of going back to bed so now i'm exhausted and i have class in a bit, but it was so couldl that i have no regrets!!!
xinyi (Chapter 3) - Mon 10 Aug 2015
Brilliant stuff! Love it! :)
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