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Rayen (Chapter 3) - Sun 01 May 2022

It is truly a testament to your writing skills that I can read just 3 chapters over and over again so happily and eagerly. But please, take me out my misery lol. Looking forward to your story growing.


KyraTekak (Chapter 3) - Wed 14 Jul 2021

Loving the story, hope for more updates 


Kimmy (Chapter 3) - Thu 09 Apr 2020

Truly excited to read more of this!


Sesshomaru's_Mate (Chapter 3) - Sat 30 Jul 2016

Please update soon i really like this and wish to read more 


CrystalizeMoonie (Chapter 3) - Fri 18 Dec 2015

i love how you portray each of your characters. The story plot is going so well, too. i hope you'll continue updating this story!


LadyFugue (Chapter 3) - Wed 14 Oct 2015

Next chapter please.


SashaMarie (Chapter 3) - Wed 02 Sep 2015

Please update soon. I can't wait to read more. Is Kagomee going to tun into a demon because of Sesshoumaru's dad? I love it so far and I am looking forward to what happens next.


roberta. (Chapter 3) - Sun 30 Aug 2015

On please update soon. I like this story. Is it also on ff.net?


Tajera Deane (Chapter 3) - Tue 25 Aug 2015

Hello, air do not often comment on stories I prefer to read and appreciate the writers imagination, however I must say your plot, detail and work on this story is excellent; It has great at potential and I look forward to reading it. Update soon!


Scar-bby (Chapter 1) - Wed 19 Aug 2015

I am eagerly waiting on an update for this. It was so well written and the plot is refreshing! Lovely job!


Kahnartis (Chapter 3) - Sat 15 Aug 2015

Wow!! This is amazing!! 

 

So so we know the cliffnotes version of the attack. We know that few people knew Kagome to still be alive, as shown by Hayate being surprised at seeing her alive and moving. We know Kagome cares deeply for Rin, and we know that that affection is equally returned. We know that Sesshomaru's father has left Kagome with a gift... It looks to be some portion of youkai. Not enough to obviously change her status as a human, but enough that she will gain wisdom and knowledge( I am presuming customs and general knowledge known to youkai at least). So she will be neither fully human nor will she be a youkai. Having parts of both makes her a hanyou of sorts. 

 

Anyway. Now I'm just rambling... Anyway this is amazing and I cannot wait to see more in the future! 

 

Also, Kagome's death scene was brilliant!! 


sonja hand (Chapter 3) - Wed 12 Aug 2015

Loved it 


Sandreline Moon (Chapter 3) - Tue 11 Aug 2015

Loving, loving, LOVING this story!  I cannot wait for more! Very original and well written - brava!
~Sandreline


Senshi_Ojo (Chapter 3) - Tue 11 Aug 2015

I like your story so far.

Why didn't you have Kagome tell Sesshomaru about her conversation? The one with the male youkai that took place just before Seeshomaru brought Kagome back to life.


Emily (Chapter 3) - Mon 10 Aug 2015

Can't wait for more!


KEdakumi (Chapter 3) - Mon 10 Aug 2015

Very interesting. Can't wait to see what happens next. 


Moonlit Rose (Chapter 1) - Mon 10 Aug 2015

I enjoyed reading these chapters. I found the dialogue between Sesshoumaru and his Alpha to be amusing. One of the things I like most is Kagome character. She has the discipline of a warrior but is not inviscible. I detest when Kagome is made to be some super-human bad-ass chick who never struggles in a fight. I find that completely unrealistic and unrelatable. So this character development of Kagome that you have is awesome.

Anyway, I eagerly look forward to you next chapter.

 

-Moonlit Rose


toni-lea (Chapter 3) - Mon 10 Aug 2015

Very intriguing and I like the pace of the story. As well as the length of the chapters. Thank you for making Kagome formidable.  She has her own power and she knows how to protect herself. Can't wait to see what happens next.


Coastin (Chapter 3) - Mon 10 Aug 2015

I woke up in the middle of the night and couldn't sleep so i went on here to read and i found your story and i literally read all three chapters at 4:00 in the monring instead of going back to bed so now i'm exhausted and i have class in a bit, but it was so couldl that i have no regrets!!!


xinyi (Chapter 3) - Mon 10 Aug 2015

Brilliant stuff! Love it! :)


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