Uh oh! The plot thickens! Will Kagome need to keep those blockers inside her body now that the jewel has been removed? Was the jewel a result of a build-up of holy energy, kinda like an oyster getting a speck of matter stuck inside the shell and the matter gets coated over and over until it becomes a pearl? Interesting. I hope that Kagome can become better now. Personally I want her to kick Sesshomaru's parents' a**ses!!! They deserve it!!! Please bring on the next chapter! This is getting good!!! Thank you!
No Uta (Chapter 16) - Mon 31 Aug 2015
I see you've incorporate the shikon no tama in this tale. I had a sneaky suspicion you were going to do that as soon as the pain in her side came up. It would explain so much about her "issues" or at least that's how I was viewing it. You could be going an entirely different route with this for all I know. It could be connected to the unborn pup. There's no telling what kind of swerve you may throw at us.
iin (Chapter 16) - Sun 30 Aug 2015
Shikon jewel?! Will It be a bad or good thing??
Mona (Chapter 16) - Sun 30 Aug 2015
Intro to the shikon no tama. Great chapter, I wonder what will happened to the jewel in this modern day time. Who will reveal its meaning and secrets?
Well I will be waiting for the update.
rose (Chapter 16) - Sun 30 Aug 2015
this is getting good
DSS (Chapter 16) - Sun 30 Aug 2015
Thank you for the update! And the shikon jewel? It will bring trouble for them so many situations I am thinking of for the jewel well...Anything can happen in this story.
Mona (Chapter 15) - Sun 30 Aug 2015
Really hoping for an update.
iin (Chapter 15) - Sat 22 Aug 2015
oh...what's kind next punishment?
rose (Chapter 15) - Fri 21 Aug 2015
next chapter please
it took me two days to get this far and i will be waiting for the end to be great. i will be patient as possible for further updates. i just want you to know that this is one GREAT story. i hope it has the happy ending im looking for. you are one author that i will be looking for from now on. your story has a flow that is easy to follow and the plot is an oringinal one. this is the first story i've read where the father of sesshoumaru doesnt like kagome and inuyasha is a small child. im loving this story and i hope it gets done soon. c'ya
Koree (Chapter 14) - Tue 18 Aug 2015
Ooooo i think i have an idea of what this little " ball " is
rose (Chapter 14) - Sat 15 Aug 2015
update soon please thank you
I hope it's nothing serious and it doesn't hurt the baby.
rose (Chapter 13) - Sat 15 Aug 2015
next chapter please
Mona (Chapter 13) - Sat 15 Aug 2015
I was really hoping this chapter turned out differently, until next time.
iin (Chapter 12) - Fri 14 Aug 2015
I'm guessing in my mind, where was Asil? Why he's not there in the gathering?
DSS (Chapter 12) - Thu 13 Aug 2015
Wow that was so unexpected (the ending) I can't wait to hear kags go off!
No Uta (Chapter 12) - Thu 13 Aug 2015
Ha ha ha blasted Jun-Long is always coming on to Kagome. He's so sly, well not really. He's obvious as all hell and I love it. Can't blame the dragon king for trying. Come hither Jun-Long. You can pet my knee instead. Just ignore me. Kimi is eerily happy about Kagome being upped with her son's heir. What on earth is she up to I wonder. Is she genuinely happy for her son, because he's finally got the woman he went bat shit crazy over losing trapped or is there more? I'm sure we'll find out I'm time. How in the hell did Sesshomaru manage to have Kagome returning to Japan? This is going to be good.
rose (Chapter 12) - Thu 13 Aug 2015
update soon please thank you
Mona (Chapter 12) - Thu 13 Aug 2015
Oh please, please, please do not let Kagome concede, have her fight and go to Seychelles with or without Sesshoumaru. Please dont allow him and his family to force a life on her that she does not want. She has already been tormented and pushed to the limits within Japan that it should only remain as vocation destination not a home. Allow the Taisho's to see the strong and independent side to Kagome. Anyways I am looking forward to the update.
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