Good dog! Sweet chapter. Thanks so much for updating.
Dog licked the phone :D
The only thing that I will point out was where Sango said Mioku was keeping her for observation two times in the same paragraph.... sounds kinda odd.
Really can't wait to see what exactly Inuyasha told Sesshoumaru about what she said.
Rhonda (Chapter 1) - Sun 02 Aug 2015
Really enjoying your original FanFic! Love how you have portrayed Rin as somewhat nerdy. Everything clicks together rather nicely. Looking so forward to more chapters!!
Just ran across this story and am throughly enjoying it.
Aww.. Kirara like a dog is so sweet! I know that feel Kagome, I'm easily manipulated by puppy dog eyes too.
rose (Chapter 34) - Sat 01 Aug 2015
next chapter please
Funny! Yes, my life in entirely ruled by two pushy dogs at home and two pushy horses at the barn. Sigh...Grins, Life is good. Must have dogs and horses. Loved the update, Thanks so much. Cheers!
Mona (Chapter 34) - Sat 01 Aug 2015
NICE!!!
Really cute and funny! I love all the characters and how you have them portrayed. Modern but true to their characters. Looking forward to more.
Yeah Rin, finally a response and the clue bird may have landed. This is really cute.
Got to love Rin!
Talk about delusional...this is too funny. Love Yasha in this, I get tired of all the Yasha bashing that goes on.
Update soon!! ;)
Yeah Sessh!
Oh yeah...I think I heard a PUHLEESE!! in that smirk. Nice chapter! I'm hooked!
Ah there he is...got to love the alpha dog.
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