Oh yes...you did very well in writing this smexy, lemony and kinky fic.
I hope one day you will come back and expand this story to more lemony and romantic goodness. :)
I would love to read the craziness and stupidity that is Inuyasha and also his obvious reactions to finding S/K like that.
I would also like to read more on how S/K came to be in their lover's tryst...loved the short one shot.
Excellent writing!!!