I feel bad for Sesshomaru. He's being forced to take a mate and the one he wants he can't have. If only there was some way for them to be together.
I think it should be Toran, she hates Sesshomaru more. On a different note, I love this story so much! I think that it is great that Sesshomaru and Kagome are trying to understand eachothers languages and ways of life, it bringd more emotion to the story, if that makes sense.
Oktobre (Chapter 9) - Tue 23 Jun 2015
Toran. I think she would be a better choice. Given her animosity towards Sesshoumaru.
Loveyaa (Chapter 9) - Tue 23 Jun 2015
Hmm...Naraku. I wasn't expecting him, but it makes sense if the eastern tribe is preparing for war to take over. I wonder how Sesshoumaru will deal with this and why he isn't sitting in the main throne. I can't wait to see what happens next and how long Kagome has to wait for him :)
P.s. I think Yura would be a more playful character to include.
Yura!
She's more seductive and bitchy.
Toran is more annoying i think.
Even though she's more familiar with sesshomaru i think yura is pretties than her.
silvery (Chapter 9) - Mon 22 Jun 2015
I think Yura but she should one of antagonists.
silvery (Chapter 9) - Mon 22 Jun 2015
Wow naraku?! My favorite villain XD
Loveyaa (Chapter 8) - Sun 21 Jun 2015
Its nice that they are getting along so well and figuring each other out. Interesting that Sesshoumaru already thinks he's in love with her. I wonder what will happen when he leaves to meeting with his tribe at dawn. I can't wait to see what happens next :)
No Uta (Chapter 8) - Sat 20 Jun 2015
Yay!!! I'm all caught up! This was a touching chapter. They's make a beautiful couple. This truly is a Sessh/Kag love story like none I've ever read. This is a magical, mythical, enchanting fairytale. To answer your question in your A/N; I'd personally like to see Yura of the hair in this plot. I don't know that she'd be the better fit. I just really liked her character in the manga and anime. She was pretty bad a $$. Thanks so much for the wonderful update!
No Uta (Chapter 7) - Sat 20 Jun 2015
Happy be-late birthday my dear. You are so dedicated to have written on your special day. I love how you've incorporated the scene with Inu no Taisho, from movie 4 I believe - as he asks Sesshomaru if he has something to protect.You described his father as having dark wings, well done. Boy was she giddy about having more bananas haha. It was precious how Kagome is putting forth effort to communicate and get to know her saviour.
No Uta (Chapter 5) - Sat 20 Jun 2015
I'm sorry that I have fallen behind! This.chapter. O.M.G so ooooooooo cuuuuuuuuuute! The bananas, oh those brilliant bananas lololololol. I have giggled so much. This was absolutely delightful.
Please they must be together :(
Kae (Chapter 8) - Fri 19 Jun 2015
This was a beautiful chapter. I adored it. Even with the slight melencholy undertones, it was such a great update. I can't wait for more.
About your question, Sessh's mom already mentioned another race of bird people (black swans I think?) threatening the western lands. Sounds a bit like the panthers to me so I vote for Toran to have a role in this story. Just my two cents.
I hope you update soon, but I understand if you get caught up in a great show. That happens to me all the time and my writing suffers for it too. Good luck and thank you for this chapter!
I need more before I die, I love sess and kagome characters is this it's great!!
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