.....I was reading and reading and reading and then I realized...I finished the latest chapter.....more please? :3

More chills, the angst and the feeling g in this is so moving. I can feel Sesshomaru's affection for her. Is it Rin or Rin's ancestor? I wonder? I could picture Sesshomaru in a fiercely protective and possessive stance as he swooped in and took her away. You've paintied a ,stunning image here. 

This chapter gave me chills, down my spine and up again and again. This was haunting, heart wrenching, gruesome, detailed and I fancied every word of it. Brilliant! 

WHAT WHAT WHAT Omg omg someone else from her past has survived and in her world!!!!!! I wonder who it could be? Shippo, Koga hmmmmm....Oh the suspense!

Ooooh yesss yes I will be patient. This is so worth the wait.

My goodness such an intense chapter. Wow you have got me hooked. Definitely following this through to it's conclusion. What promise I wonder has Sesshomaru broken hmmm? Hurting Kagome in the first place or allowing her to find him or is it that book he gave her? Who is the other male that approached him? So many questions! Ok. Ok I'm off to the next chapter. 

Omg a lovely alluring chapter. I'm enjoying the air of mystery so far. 

Pardon me but ... Holy sh*t! What a powerful first chapter!  I am already captured by the plot line and it is simply the beginning. There's so much promise in this. Holy hell this is good so far. I am looking forward to reading more. I absolutely love your portrayal of Sesshomaru. Excellent work.