Hi... just wanted to tell you that this story def needs a continuation. If there's anything that can be done to encourage you to create more to this gem I'd def try to do it if it's within reason. I'll beta.. I'll be a muse... but I just have to know what happens to everyone.

PLEASE YES PLEASE PLEASE PLEASEEEEEE SEQUELS PLEASE I LOVE THIS STORY SO DAMN MUCH

DUDE YES AWESOME SEQUEL PLEASE 

I definitely fancied this. In fact I am immensely fond of what you've done here. An extremely unique plot. The only one of its kind I have read so far. This is also my first song-fic of sorts. I tend to by-pass them but your summary caught my eye. I'm glad I did so. I would have missed out on something fantastic in the making. This has sequel written all over it. 

Really good, there is so much potential in this story line! I hope you continue it or have a sequel... Good luck and I wish you much inspiratio!

Yup....still good even the second time I read through it.

I always admire authors who are able to make me feel something by the end of the one-shot. Make me fall in love with Sesshomaru once more, make me hate the villain...etc. You've made me feel all different types of emotions by the time I'm done the one-shot. Amazing.

Thank you so much for writing such a wonderful piece, and I hope you DO write another chapter for this. I would love to see where it goes :)

Your friend, SSA

Wow this is definitely a good fic. You did very well keeping them in character. Great job! I loved the ending because it leaves room for more. I hope you continue this.