I'm happy you finally got the chance to update and hope that more chapters are released soon.
Great story so far! This isn't the typical tie-up-Kagome-and-sacrifice-her-to-demon routine in which said demon frees Kagome, falls for her, mates her and magically protects the village that tried to sacrifice her in the first place story! This has quite a few twists and turns in it. It made me at first believe that Kagome was a lost heir to a kingdom or something, until Sesshomaru believed that she was probably a hanyu, but now I am not sure what she is either. Priestess abilities yes. Having villagers become violent towards you when they find out this information is very strange. It makes me believe that the villagers are just as afraid of people with any sort of power whatsoever and not just demons. Of course, Kagome's grandmother was treated with a bit of respect, since she was a Miko, until the village started to feel threatened by Kagome's presence. How sad.
Since Sango came onto the scene I can only hope that Miroku will make an appearance. Or quite possibly Shippo and his family. I personally don't want him to be an orphan. I want both of is parents to be alive, well and just travelling to the village to trade or settle down near there. Something like that at least.
Will Inuyaha be around for this fic as well? I got the idea that Sesshomaru's Father was alive at first, but then I got the second impression that he was dead after all. So sad.
Can't wait for the next chapter. Thank you!
Koree (Chapter 6) - Thu 10 Dec 2015
Lol i saw that one coming xD Kagome's everyone teacher from now on
I am thoroughly enjoying the story. Please update soon!
Leaora (Chapter 6) - Wed 02 Dec 2015
Ah! I don't mind long chapters at all. It's great to see the lonely orphan gaining a following Maybe they will become a warrior village and dedicate a festival to Kagome.
Where's sesshy??
Saiya (Chapter 6) - Wed 02 Dec 2015
Awww
Mona (Chapter 6) - Tue 01 Dec 2015
Awesome, i like how you incorporated Sango in the story, so can't wait for the others to appear ecspecially Shippo. Please update soon.
Mona (Chapter 1) - Tue 01 Dec 2015
Question, in this chapter you keep referring to the man as her rapist but I thought he was not successful in the act, so would he not be her almost rapist.
Koree (Chapter 5) - Mon 16 Nov 2015
Sango :)
Pamela (Chapter 5) - Thu 05 Nov 2015
Hooray! drum roll....Sango made her appearance:) So curious as to why Kai acted the way he did when Kagome gave him three questions although I say he took some liberties and asked a few more:) wonder if Sess will return as he said after all he usually displays some sort of honor. I don't see him apologizing for his words, but maybe he'll get a little more soft around Kagome. I loved the sweet moment with Rin atop the roof and Reika so excited about her tea house. I also wonder why the male villagers keep referring to her as Lady, hehe. I know curiosity killed the cat luckily I'm not one, rolls eyes. I like how original this story is great job!
Zeelian (Chapter 2) - Wed 04 Nov 2015
Seems promising, a few minor things tho. It needs a few extra readthroughs to catch the grammar errors and quite a few swapped words (like veil tounge insteal of vile tounge, veil is a fabric used to cover ones face with, like brides. Vile is disguisting) and also some switching between past & present tense that disturbs the flow of the story.
Also a "moon" is the time it takes the moon to complete a full cycle (28 days), not 1 night.
And finally you should change the universe flag from "canon" to "alternate".
I think she is part of the youkai
Next chapter please.
Saiya (Chapter 5) - Wed 04 Nov 2015
That was Spectacular. Rin is So Cute, Poor Sango!
Mona (Chapter 5) - Tue 03 Nov 2015
Looking forward to a new chapter, hopefully coming soon.
Pamela (Chapter 4) - Tue 22 Sep 2015
This story is great! I like how original it is and how Sesshomaru and Kagome work together and independently. Excited for the next update.
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