Quite an intersting way to tell a story. Its quite enjoyable though. I will be looking out for the sequel. I can't wait to see what you come up with next :)

The last 4 chaps where wonderful. Am surprised noone wants a sequel. I enjoy your short story.

Omg Run Kags

Great chapter! I loved it and hope you update soon!

More lemon!

I like your story so far.  I like how it's mostly told through sensation and thought in a way that seems so natural.  I look forward to reading more.

Good update. I look forward to the next one.

Sango nneeds to mind her own business.

Great story. I love how Sango is worried about what she'll tell the others. I guess that means that they were all in on sending Sango to watch over her. Hope you update soon!

LOVE this! More Please!

Hooray for smut! Get it Kagome! You get yours woman!

Well. This Kagome knows what she wants and isn't afraid to get it! Get it girl!

Love it! I like some good smut every now and then too. ^_^