Melyssa (Chapter 5) - Sun 03 Oct 2010

when r u going to update? its really good


slayer0427 (Chapter 5) - Mon 20 Oct 2008
Nice nice I like the way the story line is well along its way, good job please keep going!!!!

Lady Scheherazadea (Chapter 5) - Sun 19 Oct 2008
You have a some tense problems but your story is quite interesting. I look forward to reading more.

snowbird (Chapter 5) - Fri 17 Oct 2008
I hope her 'instincts' about their new master is correct and he does turn out to be trustworthy. At least enough to let them go in the end. I just hope he never wants her to have sex with his younger brother even if he shows an interest in her. I only want that to happen between her and Sesshoumaru. I'm just an old-fashioned romantic at heart. I like the idea of Kagome and Sesshoumaru having to share a room. hahaha. They've been together all throughout this so I guess that she did not even think it odd or protest that they still have to share sleeping quarters. I just had a laughable idea. What if the Duke's younger brother swung the other way? It would be funny to see how Sesshoumaru dealt with the situation of being romantically hit on by a male. hahaha. Of course my wish would remain the same for him as it is for Kagome. I just think the humor of the chase would be for interesting reading. Oh well, you've made it interesting so far, and I'm sure you will keep it that way. I'm just eager for the next update.

utterchaos247 (Chapter 5) - Fri 17 Oct 2008
...i can't help but wonder if kagome may be put into a compromising position while 'spying' on the duke's brother...

BeautifulMorningSun (Chapter 5) - Fri 17 Oct 2008
Hm. I'm Not Sure About This Duke. I Wonder If He's As Nice As He Seems. I'm Also Wondering If It Is Perhaps HIS Plan to Take His BROTHER'S Lands and Wealth Instead of the Other Way Around. I Think Sesshomaru's Right, Kagome Shouldn't Trust Him As Much As She Does. But I Do Hope Her Instincts Are Right! Please Update As Soon As You Can!

kotainuchan (Chapter 4) - Thu 09 Oct 2008
OMG what's going to happen next?!?! Update soon please I'm dying to know.

jaimesesshy (Chapter 3) - Sun 05 Oct 2008
This story is fantastic! Update soon please!

SilentlyFuming (Chapter 4) - Sun 05 Oct 2008
begin what i wonder...

BeautifulMorningSun (Chapter 4) - Sun 05 Oct 2008
OMG! I LUV This Story! PLEASE Update Soon! It Is AMAZING!

SilentlyFuming (Chapter 3) - Fri 03 Oct 2008
yay! an update *^_^* I'm really liking this story, update again soon!

snowbird (Chapter 3) - Fri 03 Oct 2008
I'm really excited about this story with each update that I read. The plot is really different. I just hope her new 'master' doesn't force her to be his or someone else's sex slave (except Sesshoumaru, of course). haha.

SilentlyFuming (Chapter 2) - Wed 01 Oct 2008
interesting start, i wonder where those youkai are from (korea, china, russia, or maybe even hawaii...?)

SilentlyFuming (Chapter 1) - Wed 01 Oct 2008
LOL! i just read the summary, england huh? gods im dumb XP

ConsistentlyInconsistent (Chapter 2) - Wed 01 Oct 2008
I love it! I can't wait to see where this goes and what kind of 'games' Sesshoumaru wants to play =] the only thing I thought I'd bring to your attention though is when referring to their shackles it would be better to use 'metal' because 'medal' is like a badge or award ^_^ sorry, I'm a little ocd about that kinda stuff...otherwise, wonderful job! I love reading stories where proper grammar and punctuation are used. It's amazing how fast a wonderful plot can be ruined by something as small as that =]

Elenna (Chapter 1) - Tue 30 Sep 2008
Interesting. I would love to see how this story goes.

Yukino Sohma (Chapter 1) - Tue 30 Sep 2008
Wow. This sounds interesting. Foreigners in Japan kidnapping the shikon miko and the great sesshoumaru. Man are they screwed. Please update soon.

stars (Chapter 1) - Tue 30 Sep 2008
i like this please update soon

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