This was a wonderfully interesting story. The drabble style worked extremely well with it. I began reading this on fanfiction .net but it's unfinished there. Unfortunately it was quite a bit harder to read here. I do hope you someday post the complete version there for ease of reading. I know this is one I will enjoy reading again.
Anyway I found your plot very original. The whole thing with the bands and mind control was something I hadn't seen before in Inuyasha fanfiction. I also loved the idea of Kagome joining the military of the West as part of her next calling. The only thing that I was left curious about was that lesser Kami she fought. We never did learn more about him and I would have figured he would pop back up at some point and cause trouble.
i'm reading this story for the 4th time and i never left a review. now i'm leaving one. this story was the best. i found it to be funny, sad, erotic, and action filled. i'm glad sess and kags got together and worked out their differences. i'm glad that kags made more friends that she could count on. the challenges she faced made her who she was and i was grateful to see her keep her humility and develope her understanding of how youkai live, work, fight and love. i was happy to see the inuyasha finally have his happy ending along with rina and masa getting mated as well. kags and sess having pups at the end was the cherry on top of a great big sundae. seeing them in kags time and doing well was the best ending ever. i'm a fan of your work and i hope you come back with new stories for me to read. keep up the great writing. c'ya'
marisel (Chapter 500) - Wed 03 Oct 2018
Super nice. I waited a long ti,e to read the completed story. Who was the uname one, human, priest or yokai???
Maria (Chapter 1) - Wed 01 Aug 2018
Beautiful story. Thank you so very much for sharing your tale with us. You are such an awesome writer.
Dryft (Chapter 19) - Wed 07 Mar 2018
I'm really enjoying this story!!
I almost screeched when I saw on Fanfic.net that you hadn't finished it, but rest assured, I also have a Dokuga account, so ergo, I GOT TO FINISH IT!
What a great drabble series. I really enjoyed it. Nothing felt too OOC or forced. We never did find out what Masa did to Rin to keep her safe however.
Rose (Chapter 121) - Sat 14 Oct 2017
Very interesting story. I like it but am missing Shippou. It seems the gang is at the palace except him.
Great story. Really well developed and a joy to read.
-EA
loved it!
ponpiri (Chapter 500) - Sat 24 Jun 2017
Ok, so even though I whined a couple of times about Kagome being a bit OOC and the ending felt rushed, I still liked the story. I was surprised to see that Inuyasha didn't have much of a role here. Not complaining since I don't care for his character, but it was a surprise. Anyway, off to read your other stories.
ponpiri (Chapter 378) - Sat 24 Jun 2017
But... Sesshou paid off a guy she was dating, so he lied to her as well. I mean, I get "you lied to your king" blah blah blah, but the punishment was a bit harsh. And speaking of parenting, whose fault is it that Rin's a spoiled brat? Her doggone daddy, that's who!
ponpiri (Chapter 112) - Thu 22 Jun 2017
This story is really interesting so far. Kago is starting off on equal-ish footing with Sesshou, instead of trying her best to please him like how their relationship is typically written. I still still Kago's inner dialog is off, but I'm really liking this. It almost doesn't feel like a drabble but a long manuscript.
ponpiri (Chapter 44) - Thu 22 Jun 2017
The story is easy enough to read so far, but it seems like Kago is terribly out of character and the dialog seems very modern and very "dude bro" for the setting. I think I understand since you're writing about a military encampment; it's just offputting considering the source material.
Drabble was refreshing for a change. Short and sweet. :) I breezed through all 500 chapters in a day and I still want more! Haha.. I was hoping there'd be a love triangle between Sesshoumaru, Kagome and one of the 3 inus always sleeping around her. Teehee XD. But I guess Kagome already had her heart on Sesshoumaru, and just that short rumor about Riku was too much to handle for poor Sesshoumaru. Hehe... Interesting plot as always. I really am in awe of where you get all your inspirations from! So amazing! Thanks for yet another adventure! =)
THis story is one I have read twice now and have loved ever minute of it. Keep up the good work
Nicole (Chapter 500) - Sun 26 Feb 2017
Thanks for this phenomenal story!
I give this story 5/5 stars! :) I started reading this on Fanfiction.net and just had to continue reading it here. I thank-you for writing it and I love how it was created and how it went. The characters and the story line was amazing. I have to say it is a little weird getting used to such short chapters when they could all become one but it was amazing and I look forward to reading more from you and wish you the best for furture stories :)
Angela (Chapter 499) - Sat 14 Jan 2017
I am very happy to finally finish reading this marvelous tale and can't wait to read more of your tales.. Kudos
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