Love your story! I truly enjoyed it! I have one question, did Kagome ever wish on the jewel? Awesome fic, I hope to read a sequel!
Good story
Awwwwww
I liked it, it was a bit corny at certain parts but a very fun read. Good job!
This story was wonderful and I enjoyed it!
Virginia (Chapter 15) - Thu 10 Sep 2015
Great story, enjoyed it very much!
it took me a long time to get around to reading this story. i kept putting it off. i liked the story a lot. it had grammer mistakes, but it didnt take away from the story. the lemons were great. made me wish i was her. your writing is improving, but you might want to use MS word to fix your grammmer and punctuation mistakes. keep writing and the small stuff will work itself out. c'ya'
Silver (Chapter 15) - Mon 13 Jul 2015
absolutely love thia fanfiction and i love the amount of pups they both had :D fantastic story! I read it all back to back! <3
I love reading fanfiction. I like the story, but I noticed in the last 2 chapters that there has been some spelling and grammer errors. You don't need to capitalize words you want to stand out. If the story is flow right and spelling and grammer is good then words that don't need to be capitalize will stand out on their own.
I loved this! Kagome as a mom to shippo is adorable and the way you got SessKags together is so sweet, the kimono and jewelry and hunting soo cute!
Haven (Chapter 1) - Thu 16 Apr 2015
Have you ever thought of doing a sequel? Maybe Kagome and Sesshomaru's life in the present day?
Maybe going back to school where she left off after the well was sealed? I can imagine a possessive Sesshomaru posing as a teacher getting jealous as Hojo tries to flirt with Kagome -giggles-
Awesome story
Faye Valentine (Chapter 15) - Fri 10 Apr 2015
Really good story, i loved the ending!!! (:
Faye Valentine (Chapter 5) - Fri 10 Apr 2015
Good story (:
laura (Chapter 15) - Thu 09 Apr 2015
Loved it :-) thanks for a great read.
It's a very good story, but I felt like Sesshomaru was too OC. In the end, the story was very good & i look forward to your future stories!
Sarah (Chapter 15) - Wed 08 Apr 2015
But how did she learn to use all the powers she had? Its one thing to make her more powerful from the mating but how did she know how to use them right off the bat?
That was an awesome story!
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