I loved all the chapters of this fiction, and I loved Chapter 2, among them. There is a sentence in the chapter that made this fiction unforgettable even in my dreams.

"The irony of having the title of being my wife, without being my wife."

I felt my heart stop temporarily when I first read the sentence, and now that I've read the whole chapter of this fiction more than ten times, I still feel the same way. The unhealthy relationship between the couple, the alienation he would have felt from his family when he returned home, the despair of being betrayed by his soul mate. Almost all of the crises he faced as a husband, as a man, were entirely contained in the sentence. I deeply sympathized with him. I felt pity for her, too. Since they were all perpetrators and victims, I didn't particularly hate either one. They felt like they were playing chicken games, appealing for affection and support that they didn't get enough from each other. 

They could do better to each other. Perhaps he could assign some of his heavy works to his trusted subordinates. She could share her frustration with him before she cheated on her. Unfortunately, they did not. They're filling the gap now because they didn't make the effort they should have made in time, and they love each other even now that they know all the wrongs they've done to each other, so they won't divorce.

Most of all, what's frustrating is that our great drama writer has left, with only the above-mentioned reasons, hints that they will settle the conflict amicably. Your readers, including me, want to see a formal ending written by the author, rather than a brief ending created by our imagination. You should know that there are still many of your amazing fictions, especially readers who love The Divorce. We hope you'll come back some day and continue your work, including The Divorce.

But if your conditions are not enough to do that, I just want to say that I love and worship you and your works, your imagination and the beautiful depictions from your hands. <3

I knew it was something !! Great chap

Interesting story so far, looking forward to more!

Wow, was not expecting Kagome to cheat on Sesshomaru. Was Kagome raped by Naraku? So many questions, please let this story have a happy ending where they get back together, if not then that's ok. You have me hooked on this story. Add to favs, keep up the good work, can't wait to see what happens next. ^.^

I don't like Kagome and think Sesshomaru deserves better. The problems predated him working hard. If she was lonely she should have talked to him. She chose not to and uses it as an excuse. But it's a weak one. The biggest mistake he made was loving her. I'm hoping he gets freedom from her and a new start. How could he ever trust Kagome? 

So this is definitely something else.  The summary points it's sesshoumaru s fault when we see that the villain is kagome.  but something must've happened to make her this way. Is naraku somehow controlling her? It's my first time reading about a cheating kagome. And she even doesn't want to change or regret. Something is not right but I don't know what.  I am not sure I like it and no not because I hate the fic or the writing,  it's just I don't like this kagome.  It's a preference as a reader so I am not sure I want to read more. Maybe if I understood more and the reasons.  You even point she always cheated and her daughter isn't his. Not sure I am comfortable with this in rest your writing is good and descriptive.  Good luck with everything!  Take care!

- sighs - Kagome seems like the bad guy here but i know something happened :/ Great chap

Good story. But now my question is was the whole thing a dream or was the part with Midorikio?

So many questions left unanswered

I'm very glad that your going to pursue your dreams! I've been following your story for quite a while and look forward to picking up your first published piece.  I really wish that you were going to finish the story but i guess it'll have to wait until i can buy it.  Will your publishing be the same as your pen name?

so no more the divorce fanfic chapters

Is this truly the end of the story? are you going to finish this one or put it up for some one else to finish? it's a great story and shouldn't be left like this. Good luck in your future writings

I truly HATE Kagome with a passion. She cheats on her husband throughout the course of their ten years of marriage, has another man's daughter and pretends she is her husband's child, and then wants a divorce because she's "treated bad." This is truly a fantasy/fictional story because no one would be this stupid in reality. 

Your story had me utterly confused 

Angry and sad at the same time 

However your plot was very intriguing and i enjoyed it alot

But still utterly and totally confused 

If u ever decided to do a sequel

I would read it 

Wait... that was the end? 

I'm saddenled and disappointed that this fanfic will not continue but I wish you luck in your endeavors.