DeathDagger (Chapter 1) - Sat 06 Aug 2016

Sad that we didnt get to see everyone's response...but good lemon


Loveyaa (Chapter 1) - Sat 06 Feb 2016

Quite the bit of passion. Whew. I can't wait to see what stories you come up with next :)


candace peaches (Chapter 1) - Tue 25 Aug 2015

OMG!, that was hot and that's all i'm gonna' say. c'ya'


MindlessMina (Chapter 1) - Fri 27 Mar 2015

Holy fuckballs that was amazing!! I need more!!


DeathDagger (Chapter 1) - Fri 27 Mar 2015

They are so cute and hot! Whooo


Ree-san (Chapter 1) - Thu 26 Mar 2015

I enjoyed the oneshot and I don't think it came across as rushed.  Athough, I think the posting was.  A little over halfway down the story starts over and completely goes through.  If you don't keep going you don't get to read the ending.  The other editing stuff is minor, like word swapping feel instead of fell (I think that was the order for those two).  I hope you keep posting!


Kyo (Chapter 1) - Thu 26 Mar 2015

I like your story but I want top point out repetitions in your paragraphs. If you want to know what I mean just reread your story.


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