Hello I have just found your story and I find it interesting. Please update soon.

Just seems too coincidental. Sesshomaru wanted Kagome's mother and is now after Kagome?
Though something must have happened because Touga obviously did not win Takara and Sesshomaru turned as cold and merciless as he is now - he did after all murder Takara and her family in order to "punish" Kagome. So, whatever happened must have been very bad for not only neither siblings to win Takara but turned Sesshomaru's desire for her to ashes to where he wouldn't care if he killed her (and even her family).

It also seems that Touga and Sesshomaru's father is no longer in the picture.....? So I am assuming he died by the time this situation with Kagome happened.

The plot deepens!!!!!!!

How did she not die of a heart attack?! Like seriously, my heart would have been like "goodbye buh bye now!" lol. Please update soon it always makes my day to see these updates!

next chapter please

Hmmmm.... It's interesting that the brothers have a slightly different intention to Takara especially how both worded their feelings, or to be precise, their beasts' feelings for a certain human. I can see that in Sesshoumaru's case it's more like obsession rather than love as Touga apparently shares with his beast. "Desire" and "Longing" have both different meanings with the former leaning on the passionate fires and the other one on the more subtle yet no less as passionate. But the difference rans deeper in that while the former can be applied in a relationship, it certainly does not guarantee that the one feeling it would jump at a commitment but more on casual while the latter is what a person feels when he/she is looking for prospective partners in life. Which means that Touga wants Takara as mate and possesses affectionate feelings for her. It doesn't make Sesshoumaru's feelings lesser, but it's more like one would find in an abusive relationship. He desires her and wants her for himself yet staying with him would be detrimental to her due to his not-so-good attitude to everything and everyone and is, for a lack of better word, selfish. Already, he wants her to wear more skin-covering clothes simply because he doesn't like others to see her in such a state. Granted, Takara didn't know, but the sentiment is still there. How much more if they are finally together? He would definitely be a tyrant that she certainly didn't need in her life.

I guess this obsession must've been the reason he's adamant to get Kagome isn't he? He must've not taken it well like Touga when Takara chose neither one (as implied in previous chapters) and therefore created an opportunity to obtain the daughter in her stead. Is that it so far? That's definitely what I can see here.

hmmm so Sesshomaru seems intrested in Tanaka who is Kagome's mother, but so is Touga (Inuyasha's father). So now, Sesshomaru is mentally otrturing Kagome who is Tanaka's daughter and he also killed Tanaka and Kikyo.......kinda wondering what happened to make him so cruel to the family. Honestly, Kagome is just a child really, what teenagers have the maturity to think very heavy and serious things through? She's never been revealed to Sesshomaru's world and he's acting as if she is purposely being disobediant. In the beginning she didn't even know he was real and as he continually proved how powerful he was and what he is capable of, she tried to protect her family and friends but things just didn't work out.

Not sure if Sesshomaru is more concentrated on breaking her spirit down completely or if he is just jealous and angry and taking it out on her....which makes me worry for Kagome once he has her in his world.

OOOHHH!!! This was such an awesome chapter. Part of Sesshy's past is revealed!!!! I just love your descriptive passages; it's like you're painting a canvas right in the air with your words. Beautiful imagery, wonderful plot. So do Toga and Sesshy both like Takara? She sort of sounds like Kaggy, with 'scintillating blue eyes.' Something like that, lol. Anyways, update soon, kay? :3 Can't wait!

Oooo! Huge twist! I was definitely not expecting Sesshomaru and Toga to be brothers, and it's obvious that they're both interested in Takara - perhaps not for the same reasons, but only time will tell! Great chapter :)

I am so happy to read this! After a 12 hour shift this is like a chill pill! Please update soon. Love it, hope you are doing well!

ah come on dont live us hanging.   next, next, nextttt. please and i though sesho was a bad demon bad bad demon

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Thank you for the update!! Oooh this was a twist! :)

Yay! You're back! I was starting to worry :) So the next chapter will have Sesshy's story... And Inu no Taisho is awesome! You go girl, and you will beat your pain meds *wink* May the muse be with you!

I am so happy to see this update! I hope you get better soon! Update when you can!(:

oooooh! I thought there might be a connection! I cannot wait for the next chapter!

next chapter please

Wow! So that's what all this is about. Figures Touga would be youkai, along with hanyou Inuyasha. But wait, Sesshoumaru is Touga's younger brother? That's what you implied at least. So what about Takara and her human yet not identity? And what about the Killing Perfection's treasure? Must have been Takara herself or something of that effect. She did say something about her past haunting Kagome.

OMG! So much has happened since the last time I read/reviewed! Kagome's entire family is dead, and there's an obvious connection between Toga and Sesshomaru. I wonder what happens next! Can't wait for the next update :)

I feel sorry for Kagome. She had just done everything she could for Kikyo but ended up losing her family and all because Inuyasha can't take a hint when she wantshim away. Seriously, it's Inuyasha's fault they died. I also wondered how Toga could be acquainted with Sess. Is it because of him Izayoi died or something? 

Hmmmmm the beast has emerged huh? He's definately got a past with Sesshomaru especially since Touga even knew his name and recognized him. I wonder if Touga can help Kagome at all....