Ooohhh I can't wait for the update.

next chapter please

I see now that she wanted to protect them both...she probably had the baby at kazu's place but next question...why didnt she bring kagome with her? Maybe she came back for kagome and got caught... and thats when the fight happened. :(

I kinda sorta had the affair and kagome birth out of order. Forgive me. Preggy by hubby and having an affair cause she just dont care.  Mr. Right! 

I am not trying to be hateful here but..... i couldnt help but think .....how could the mother be so ...so..... i dont know. She admitted that her daughter, kagome,  would look just like her and would therefore be in danger and need to be protected and then she goes out and has an affair which hey, i totally get it because her man's an abusive controlling a-hole while her lover is mr. Right!  So she gets pregnant by her lover, has the baby, manages to get that newborn to the father for safe keeping, fights with her husband because he found out, spewed out some nasty dying last words that, if she had been in the right state of mind ( which i know she was not cause well....who is when they are about to die right? so i DO understand), common sense would have told her that those words would cause her daughter a world of suffering.......and she didnt get kagome to safety...didnt even think of her as she died. 

Thats so....heart breaking...i want to cry for kagome. Im really hoping she gets her happy ending now.

Im not bashing the author here...i understand that i need to continue reading the story as the plot unfolds to understand more and more. I am enjoying the story and i do want you to continue typing it. 

Liking it so far and can't wait to read more, please update soon.

I for one enjoy the author notes you put in your chapters. However, for convenience it might be easier to have them in the beginning and ending of the chapter. Good luck with your phone and hope to see a good news update soon.

Interesting plot.

A bit of advice.  You should remove the author notes and questions on spelling since it interrupts the flow of reading.  It can also be very annoying and make people not want to read the story.  If you're unsure of the correct spelling of a word that's not in a regular dictionary then look at other stories and use the most common spelling or check an Inuyasha site online and see what they use.

can naraku get his ass kiced or killed please no one needed to hurt our kagome ! *Growls*

gr8 story so far!! Can't wait till the next chapter is out!!! don't worry its not too rushed. I wish the chapter was longer but i can understand you wanting to wait and see how it goes!!! Update soon! :D

This seems like a good beginning. But now I have questions. Why isn't anybody else noticing the abuse? Shouldn't a demon smell the pain or hurt or internal bleeding Kagome might have? Is this where Sesshomaru comes in? Also how is Sesshomaru going to be involved in her life, does he save her? Did Kikyo cheat on Naraku with Inuyasha? Why didn't Kikyo take Kagome with her? So many questions. I do hope you continue this story. I think it has great potential. Keep up the good work.

hummm, interesting! can't wait for another chapteeerr~

Not a bad beginning, odd but not bad! Advice though; having multiple people speak in a single paragraph is confusing, so splitting the paragraphs when a new person begins to speak will help with clarity a LOT! Looking forward to what you do next~