Love this story. Update soon!

Great chapter. I enjoyed it immensely.

I believe you when you say it's hard to write Sesshomaru but you do a Splended Job. This Chapter was Sweet.

next chapter please

Go Kagome You Alpha You!!!

I like this. Please continue making more! 

Oh Please Update. SO GOOD

I love Kagome's smugness about how she's alpha. It made me giggle.

I have a feeling there is a connection between Rin and Kagome...I'm guessing it will be explored more in the later chapters...which I can't wait to read!!

Dang... He gonna get you... Watch out inu...

Aaawwwww Rin is Such a Cutie!!!

That was soooo cute. Kawaii! I loved it and the progression. I look forward to continue this wonderful adventure.

This story sounds interesting, keep it coming.

This story sounds interesting, keep it coming

next chapter please

I don't mean to sound harsh but you need spacing. Your story looks like a really really long paragraph. I know the space is different than when you post/ copy&paste your story. I kept getting lost while reading. It's a good story so far. Just hard to read. 

That's a lot jumbled up. Paragraphs and page breaks....would a wonderful add on