That was FUCKIN AWSOME.
Hahaha! I love Kagome’s fear when her ‘savior’ got home. Okay, if I had been in that situation, I’d be scared, too, but I still snickered. Oh, and saying he is an albino to keep how he looks in canon in your A/U is always a great choice.
-snorts- So, it was his brother that picked her up instead of Sesshomaru being the hero, but hey, he allowed a total stranger to stay the night. That’s somethin’.
You know me well, and I am not a fan of Star Trek, but you totally made me laugh when Sesshomaru made Kagome sit down on his couch just to show her who he was referring to about the one wo had died. So, point for you lol
>.> Let’s backtrack for a sec. Wow, Sesshomaru’s a chatterbox. Love it XD And yet, I can see some canon in him. He’s the same yet hilariously different. Omg! That dog—and freakin tease! Poor Kagome. She thought he was coming on to her but he was just joking. Still, even when joking, he’s fucking hawt!
More. Definitely more is needed :D
So sorry to hear about the broken ankle. Be a lamb and let it heal. Too often people(like myself) try to get back on with their life way too quickly only to pay for the mistake later in life. If you have anyone to help you...LET THEM!!! Do yourself a favor, if you can, and write until you're tired or read stories you haven't had time for, watch tv, or movies. Indulge in laziness because when you are well again, you'll have your hands full catching up and getting on with living and caring for your family...if you have one.
Now on to this new story... I rather like the beginning and I like Kagome's will to live her own life rather than be her family's puppet. It just a shame she didn't do better planning out how she was going to keep paying for life's necessities while pursuing her carrer in writing.
I understand her desire to leave law school but if her grades were good and she was doing well there, wouldn't it have been more profitable as well as logical to keep doing this as a precautionary measure incase her writing career failed? Most young people have predestinened notions that they can just jump out there and do whatever to get a place and make it big in the meantime and unfortunately, life isn't that easy anymore and if she thinks that she can fully run away from a father than sounds as influential as her father sounds, he probably already has people out there looking for her. Unless of course she really destoyed that father's love for her and he gave up on her completely. I've heard many Japenese families are very hard on their children and with today's ways and televisions showings of other cultures, well maybe she thinks she can do the same. I can only hope that who(Sesshoumaru???) found her will be able to handle her fiery little temper and she, herself.
Maybe she does have talent. if she does, trying to find the right people could have been done through school councelors perhaps. I'm sure they have writng classes or maybe she could have tried for night school if she had the right way in which to get her father to allow her this little side course...perhaps for "fun", I would tell him. If she indeed had talent maybe they could have shown her the right people to talk to.
Maybe I'm rambling on too much but I never had a chance at anything and now because my husband worked rediculous hours where I had to do his and my work with little help,(my daughter to young and small to help)around our house and land that when we moved in with my mother after we found both she and I had pnemonia(mine, was "walking pnemonia" and she took her to her bed where she wouldn't eat or care for herself and I feared her death when I took her to the hospital and she asked us to live with her. That land and home was too much for me but I put all I had into it and now I'm a disabled woman with medial problems that could have been avoided.
Just like me, Kagome didn't look at the whole picture, She just wanted her own life and life is harder than we really know it is. I am anxious to see how this turns out. This Kagome is a living time bomb, I think. She got herself totally plastered...alone and then had no place to go and no money to take her anywhere. She's a disaster waiting to happen and if throwing up and passing out ina back alley isn't a bad thing to let happen, then what is??? Just hope she says thank you to the stranger who took her into his home, cleaned her up and allowed her sleep off her stooper before accusing him of taking advantage of her.
JEN
p.s. I like your work very much!
I read the summary for "Chaos Theory" and I was hooked! I am enjoying the way the story is being set up. Looking forward to more :D
Panther (Chapter 1) - Mon 02 Mar 2015
Whoa, I really like the way this has started!
Kagome's story is truly disastrous, it looks like there's no way around her situation...I hope that we will get to see that rich oppressive family again once she's managed to get back up on her feet, to see the dynamics and so she can tell them to shove it!
Long live creativity! (Even if it means ending up collapsed in some alley somewhere xD)
And I get the feeling that Sesshoumaru's about to make his grand entrance...I wonder if he was perhaps the bartender, or one of the patrons, or whether he was just passing by? What would motivate one such as he to take in a woman that he doesn't even know?
Love it, as with all your stories ^___^
I await the next chapter eagerly!
Another marvelous start to your new story, hellcat! :D
Being a writer myself, you made Kagome’s situation resonate within me more strongly than normal as it is almost personal. Struggling through life is a mandatory evil, and money is a must, though it be cursed. I find Kagome’s pride both admiring in that she is striving to do what she loves and not let her father dictate to her, but also crippling as she could choose to go back to her dad, with her tail between her legs, and ask/beg for help. She IS in a difficult and alarming situation, so no one would look down on her for getting help from whatever corner she is able.
Hue hue hue *-* And what is this I spy? Ii bet that is Sesshomaru she heard coming home! And he sounds a little (a lot!) on the OCD side, which I am absolutely adoring, by the way! Plus, I can’t help but wonder… for someone who obviously hates disorder and germs, it is surprising that said person would help a drunkard woman and bring her to his home.
Keep writing cause you have an avid reader in me!
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