I Love it *_____*
The say way you Write is easy to read but it is on point, so that you can Imagine everything in your Monds eye *o*
i already Has to läuft at the First Chapter where you explained sesshoumarus sneeze and kagome was scared of it xD i could Imagen it.
Sesshoumaru is a bit ooc but Not too much, but he is Really cute in your story !*^*
i Hope you will keep at it ! <3
This is so cute! Love it
Ulam (Chapter 3) - Thu 26 Feb 2015
This story is absolutely lovely to read! I've never read one where Sesshomaru and Rin fought over Kagome's attention, it's refreshing :). Keep it up!
Miss C (Chapter 3) - Wed 25 Feb 2015
I like how Sesshomaru is acting like a big baby. LOL
Oh my god! This is so funny! Who would have thought that sesshomaru and rin would be jealous of each other and compete for kagomes attention? Looking forward to the next chapter.
Ceysna (Chapter 3) - Wed 25 Feb 2015
PERFECT!!!! I love this story!! Masterfully done, by the way. I love how sneaky you're making both Rin and Sesshomaru to get Kagome's attention! I can not wait until she either figures it out and trys her hand at seeing how far they'll go to get her undivided attention, or until Rin and Sesshomaru actually get into an argument about it and get caught! *giggles* this'll be great either way!
jk (Chapter 3) - Wed 25 Feb 2015
Buwahahahahha rofl that was too good the killing perfection trying to outsmart a lil girl for a lil or a whole lot of TLC. keep updating plz plz
oh pleas e more i love this story
Nicka (Chapter 1) - Wed 25 Feb 2015
So cute, that he would even try to go against a child for Kagome's affection. Super cute.
Aw yeah sesshy is just too sweet to resist
Susy V (Chapter 2) - Sat 21 Feb 2015
How adorable! I can already tell this is going to be a great fic. I so can't wait for more chapters. Update soon! Please. :)
This story sounds interesting, keep it coming. Happy Belated Valentine's Day!
this is a GREAT story i want more
I am dying from cuteness overload aver here!!!! I was giggling like a little girl...in the middle of work lol. But I love this, please keep the updates coming :-)
Ceysna (Chapter 2) - Fri 20 Feb 2015
OMG!!! I love stories like this!!! This is perfection! The words flow beautifully! I can't wait to see more!
Rin vs. Sesshy, who will win the miko's affections!! *dresses as ref, faces Rin* Are you ready? *turns to Sesshy* Are you ready? *slices the air between them* Let's get it on!
*laughs uncontrollably* Oh my, Rin! Such mischief! :D Poor Sesshomaru!
Ree-san (Chapter 1) - Fri 20 Feb 2015
Haha, I think them competing is hilarious! I'd love to read more. He already covets her attention, I wonder how long it takes for him to push that further and for Kagome to realize the truth?
Oh my gosh, I love this! :) Would like to see you add to it!
I think its adorable that they are fighting for her attention
please oh please do more i want to see this get better i was laughing to hard about Rin challanging sesshomaru for kags attention
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