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Lana (Chapter 5) - Tue 19 Sep 2017

Your story is very interesting so far. It is a little skippy in parts, meaning it can be a little difficult to follow where you are going. I would very much like to see you continue with the story.

May I also suggest when including song lyrics in the story to either bold them or italicize them so they are easier to distinguish from the rest of the narrative.  

Also, if you would like a beta reader or help with anything please PM me.  


TeaAngel (Chapter 5) - Mon 04 Sep 2017

I Like your story but you have alot of mistakes. I look forward to the next chapters.


Lisa (Chapter 5) - Mon 04 Sep 2017

I like your story, but I do not tink Kagome has the right to take Rin from the Taisho's they are her family. She needs to stay with them and Sesshoumaru. Besides she is going go have problems with InuYasha. I don't think Sesshoumaru will care or not that Kagome likes him or not.


Ree-san (Chapter 5) - Mon 04 Sep 2017

I enjoy your story but there's a lot of editing needed for missing words, grammar, spelling and punctuation errors. It slows the flow of the story. Perhaps a beta?


Daniella (Chapter 1) - Sat 29 Jul 2017

Keep posting pleaseeeee!


misty (Chapter 4) - Wed 28 Jun 2017

please, please, please, please, please update this!!!!


Koree (Chapter 4) - Thu 23 Mar 2017

Good chap


Zinhle (Chapter 4) - Sat 18 Feb 2017

I love the story already


Mona (Chapter 4) - Tue 14 Feb 2017

Great update... I hope to read more soon.


Mona (Chapter 4) - Tue 14 Feb 2017

Great update... I hope to read more soon.


Toni (Chapter 4) - Tue 14 Feb 2017

keep it up  want to see inu get it in the end


Sessygurl (Chapter 4) - Tue 14 Feb 2017

Wonderful story. I forgot how much a fire cracker Kagome was. However, I needs my Sesshoumaru.


rose (Chapter 3) - Fri 02 Oct 2015

please update  this story  its getting real good thank you


SashaMarie (Chapter 3) - Fri 18 Sep 2015

Please update soon. I like this story so far.... Inuyasha is such an idiot I hope he gets what is coming yo him....


Koree (Chapter 3) - Wed 22 Apr 2015

Lol Kagome Put All The Tashios In Place


Yin - Yang M (Chapter 3) - Tue 21 Apr 2015

Love the chapter. I can't wait to see what Kagome going to do to Inuyasha. Update soon


Saiya (Chapter 3) - Tue 21 Apr 2015

So Awsome Go Kagome you Rock.


LibraCourt (Chapter 3) - Tue 21 Apr 2015

Awesome chapter. I liked it. Noticed one mix up though. Said she adopted Shippo 4 years ago, but in the talk with Touga she said three years, but good job. Like the company name Haha. 


rose (Chapter 3) - Tue 21 Apr 2015

next chapter please


rose (Chapter 3) - Tue 21 Apr 2015

next chapter please


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