I really like your story and hope for more! It's a great start!! I do, however, think that, if you can find the right beta for your story, you can really tweak it up a notch. I don't mean that negatively in any way; we all benefit from an extra pair of eyes for our works. There are just some areas that could use small grammatical fixes. However, please don't let that get you down. I think you've got a great thing going here!
Interesting. Hope to read more.
Great fanfiction, I love it :D I hope you make more çãñt wait <3 :3
Saiya (Chapter 1) - Wed 18 Feb 2015
That was Cute
So far this sounds like a good story. I can't wait to read more!
This story sounds interesting, keep it coming. Happy Valentine's Day!
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