This is an absolutely lovely story!!! I cannot wait to hear more from you! I indeed hope that it doesn't take Kagome too long to figure out what is going on. I also think Sango should be the next one to notice Kagome getting gifts and offering advice to her or maybe even Sesshomaru about things that Kagome likes. I wonder what her second gift is though? Perhaps a necklace? Or rouge? Maybe hes giving her items that will end up making up an outfit that he requests her to wear on a night out on the town (a fancy village or something, like in Spirited Away) or for a festival; her friends and stuff are in on it and they end up helping out leaving them on their own once they get to the destination and they have a really nice time and stuff and then Sesshomaru ends up telling her what this gift giving was all about or she figures it out!!!
That was amazing.
Sesshoumaru is such an earnest sincere suitor if only Kagome had a clue he'd presented her a suit. Inuyasha is such a mischievous jerk even when he's not being a possessive link head. It's a good start.
That was Adorable. He's so Sly.
I would like to tell you that that was amazing and I love it and I can't wait tell you do more of it.
ahh this story sounds interesting cant wait till next chapter
this looks like its gonna be a great story....can't wait till the next chapter :)
Oh please continue! I love the plot already!
I really like your story and hope for more! It's a great start!! I do, however, think that, if you can find the right beta for your story, you can really tweak it up a notch. I don't mean that negatively in any way; we all benefit from an extra pair of eyes for our works. There are just some areas that could use small grammatical fixes. However, please don't let that get you down. I think you've got a great thing going here!
Interesting. Hope to read more.
Great fanfiction, I love it :D I hope you make more çãñt wait <3 :3
That was Cute
So far this sounds like a good story. I can't wait to read more!
This story sounds interesting, keep it coming. Happy Valentine's Day!
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