So great finish I hope you torture Sesshy till he bites his claws bleeding... Love it context great setting ng great and humor getting better keep the steam on you can situate this for a while love it and drawing art to accompany lmao

For once it is the miko on the prowl.  That maru should be thankful he is the prize she is seeking.  Hell mark him and let his pride take that.  I think his beast would love it!  Inuyasha would go insane with jealousy and want.  

I really like this story. It's fun and engaging. Can't wait to see what other fun stuff  that the Taisho men and Kagome will find themselves in. You have a nice writing style. Keep up the good work. Fantastic wiritng job! Update soon if you can.

Sigh SMH. These Taisho brothers. LOL i still love Sesshoumarusama!!

LOVE IT!!! well done love it

That was a fun chapter. I'm glad Kagome figured it out and laid it down to Inuyasha when he ran into her. I like even better that Papa won't bail him out :)

Yesssss suck it Yasha! I loved how Kagome, Sess, and Touga took care of him. I also love that Sess finally claimed Kagome as his :3 Thank you dear for the update!

I'm really enjoying this story , great flow ...thanks for sharing

Kagome "make Sesshomaru beg" ;)

I adored the first few chapters, however please cut down the use of "honey". I think a rewrite of 6&7 , when you're less frustrated, would help the flow of the story.

Cool chapter, keep it coming.

How God Created Mother

Good took the fragrance of a flower,
The majesty of a tree,
The gentleness of a morning a dew
The calm of a quiet sea,
The beauty of a twilight hour
The soul of a starry night
The laughter of the rippling brook,
The grace of a bird in flight,
Then God fashioned from these things
A creation like no other,
And when His masterpiece was through,
He called it simply...MOTHER.

Happy Mother's Day!

I just can't get over the "half-sinned" part. I really hope to see how Kagome wakes up sober to these events. 

This story is so funny and I love the mix between the sarcasm and comedy. Can't wait to see how they'd unravels! 

Awesome lmao loved it

Aww, poor Sesshy. Hopefully he'll find some relief and happiness soon. I wonder how long they can keep it a secret from dad and Inuyasha. 

Hehe.  Get him Kagome!

The shift in voice/perspective and the narration is odd I'm sorry to say.  It seems to take a strong veer away from what the characters were like before and how they talk to each other.  After reading this chapter, I re-read the first chapter.  They're quite different and it's jarring.  I don't know if you're trying to do a re-write or not.  At times, the way the characters talked to each other could be a little stiff in the previous chapters, but it was very minor.  I think it's a good story and has potential.  I hope that you have the time to tweak it some.  I look forward to your next update. 

I love this fic so much! I really cannot wait to see how Kagome tames Sesshoumaru. Also I was laughing my butt off after what she said when she saw it. Yesssss lolololol

While the basic premise of this chapter WAS good... I'm sorry to sound harsh when I say this, but it was so terribly written!

I mean, all of your other chapters were written quite well, and were quite an enjoyable read, yet it seems like you had a ten-year old write this latest one!  I mean, with the constant referrals to Kagome as 'the heroine of this story' instead of referring to her by name, the really awkward dialogue between her and Sango... I had to force myself to push on through just to get to the interaction between her and Sesshomaru (which, while still kinda awkward, at least makes sense in its awkwardness).

Could you perhaps re-write the chapter so that it is the same quality as the previous chapters?  I would LOVE to see what happens next, however if the quality of the chapters continues to fall like this I don't think I'll be able to continue on.

Sorry again to sound so harsh, however know that it's only because I KNOW in my heart you can do better.

i love this story but the only thing is the overuse of honey, sweetie, and woman. It's kind of annoying every time Sango addresses Kagome she calls her honey and Sesshomaru says woman. Every now and then is fine but sometimes it's too much