Interesting. Poor Kagome.

Caught my interest...can't wait to see how this goes...hopefully super long story and chapters....

Oh. Oh wow. 

This idea sounds so interesting, and your writing is beautiful. You have a way of expressing Sesshomaru that feels honest, like this is exactly how he would react if someone stole Rin away from him - I feel precisely how much he misses her, and for you to get that across with so little words is nothing short of amazing. 

I don't have any constructive criticism to give, although I will advise you that no matter how many reviews you get or how excited you get for the next chapter, don't post it until you're absolutely certain it's the best you can get it. I only say that because I used to get so excited about reviews that I gave up quality trying to appease readers, instead of being sure I was writing something that the readers would read no matter how long it had been between chapters -- you have something incredible started here, and I think that if you take your time, and maybe get a beta reader even if you don't think you need one (I've found that a second set of eyes can be invaluable), you'll soon have one of the most popular stories on the site. 

Thank you for posting this, and I'll be looking forward to reading the next chapter!

~Aubrey