you should do despacito by Luis fonsi and daddy y Yankee and Justin beiber because it is the only version with English lyrics and after maybe sence it's not corresponding what about us by p!nk just suggesting
So confusing.... How many years passed? This looks like it isn't connected to other chapters at all. I was never a fan of song fics orhow they are called but this was interesting till now, now I am confused and just blinking in wonder. I love the idea but the presentation need some more work. I mean it's not understood, he suddenly married and three years passed already, but he was telling her to live on. And she can had a boyfriend, but here she is a mistress. Not cool at all!
Hope to see more soon! Thanks for updating!
Mona (Chapter 3) - Wed 23 Mar 2016
Great updat. Hopefully she can find someone else and have some fun, maybe a makeover is in order.
Mona (Chapter 2) - Tue 22 Mar 2016
Please do not make Kagome a helpless and weak person. What goes around comes around.
There goes my heart flying out the window. XD :D
Starry (Chapter 1) - Mon 19 Jan 2015
It's great! I love it. But you should make it into a story instead of oneshot. At least a few couples of chapters more. How I wish they will patch up again!
nia (Chapter 1) - Mon 19 Jan 2015
i hope kagome would move on. she deserves better than THAT! T^T but, then... it backs to you.
wish reading the next chapter soon~
:)
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