I really really like this story. I love when Kagome is a demon.
This is great! Especially cuz u had Banko, who's my fave charrie! And yeah, I like how you're doing your own unique thing. This one time, I read this fic that basically recounted Mulan word for word, except for switching out the names for Kagome and Sesshomaru and Inuyasha and Miroku and blah blah blah. Keep up the good work! I luv ur writing style!
I was a little skeptical going into this fic because there were a lot of ways this could have gone cliche and contrite (not to mention the multitudes of Mulan-themed Inuyasha fics out there), but I'm enjoying it so far. You've got the foundation for a fic that could turn out to be pretty excellent. I look forward to reading more!
Good chapter, keep it coming.
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