Great chapter, keep it coming. Happy Belated Valentine's Day!

I love it so much, you are starting off at an amazing pace. Though it was a little confusing but it's the first chapter so I'm giving you the benefit of a doubt, but I look forward to what happens next

Interesting start and a different concept. Hope to see more. 

This story sounds interesting, keep it coming. Happy New Year!

ooooh badassssss~~ and so ladylike to boot too nice! though sesshomaru seems a little mild here, maybe toughen him a little more? just my thought XD cant wait for the next chapter!