The heart wants what it wants. Go with your heart you two~ I'm actually kinda scared of Naraku. Kukuku~ what will he do~
Okay, I write this review with the intent on making up for that awful one you received.
Ehem (clearing my keyboards throat for this rant)
HOOOOMMAAAGGGAAAWWDD!!!!!! Sessshoooommmaaaruuuuuu!! I don't even care if the man is OOC, if there's a lord sesshomaru giving you something besides a scowl, you better roll with it! It probably happens every blue moon!
Oh and Kagura, I sympathize that she's hurt, but I'm only going as far as that. I will not defend her actions against kagome, instead, that chick better find her a good demon body to take over soon because I bet sesshomaru is gonna rip that girl a new one when he hears about her plans with Naraku
OH AND NARAKU... THISSONOFABITCH, oooooohh nothing gets your skin crawling more than reading about his sick and twisted ideals with women. Oh my goodness, if he gets his hands on Kagome and even so much as a hurt a hair on her head, I'm positive Sesshomaru is gonna rip Naraku AND Kagura a new one!! (Kagura better take notes from the master of finding demon bodies, cuz she's gonna need him rofl)
Lol, this story got me so giddy, I love it, you must continue and anytime you get a sour review, dwell on it for a few minutes but move on back to the more positive ones that are actually meant to praise you, your good work, and make you happy!
Ahh stupid reviewers. You're doing great. im enjoying every word every chapter. Thank you for writing!!!!!! And sharing!
YOU are Fantabulous!!! and never take a review to heart if they do not make it constructive... feelings are feelings.. YOUR work is Clear concise and well thought out, you do not take the plot too fast and YOU are FANTABULOUS!!!!!!
please update soOon. I love kagome and her dress. show em what you got kagome! Haha sess must be jealous that his beautiful wife is not hanging on his arm. it's awesome that kagome is a doctor. She got the power and the brains. So excited for next update.
Kat (Chapter 4) - Wed 04 Feb 2015
Interesting story update soon
Just got done reading the first chapter and I have to say it's really good and made me giggle a few times. Keep it up!
Oh snap. It's about.to.go.down!! Can't wait to see what happens next. The plot is thickening.
oh how this is going to be interesting
i love this story so far, but I'm on the edge of my seat. I would never tell anyone how to write their fic, but i really hope kagome can kick arse and take names. It's mostly a preferance of mine because i just cant ever see kagome as a girl/woman that just takes the situations life/authors hand her. Manga Kagome (in the begining) was balls to the walls. Anime kagome was a let down. I hope we see Kagoem able to handle her own against those that plot against her. After all she's a doctor, she heals for a living, she's got to know how to be able to destroy if she can heal. plus she's a miko!
A mischievous Inuyasha is never a good thing for SESSHOMARU. I take it he doesn't like Kagura one bit.
rose (Chapter 4) - Tue 03 Feb 2015
next chapter please
Ashatan (Chapter 3) - Fri 30 Jan 2015
Oh Sesshy. Don't dump Kags too!!!
Things are moving right along. This is really good.
Nice chapter, keep it coming.
Totally loving this story! I can't wait to see what inuyasha has up his sleeve and I wonder what kagura is planning
Rhonda (Chapter 2) - Sun 11 Jan 2015
OOOOOHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!
Lovin' it! Can't wait for more!
love it. update soon
Great chapter, keep it coming.
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